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Love Letter to Father, Son & Holy


How rich you have made my life...

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BeasPeas
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This is a wonderful poem and I agree that our faith sustains us. Those of us who have it are grateful for it and the guidance/comfort it gives. Others may not understand, but that's okay. Great job. Marilyn


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
    Okay to be sure... my love does not exclude ever... I thanks your Marilyn... I always love when you step in to my shop... I look forward to your reviews and for this one... I'm grateful and humbled by your sage thoughts... xo diana

reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
    I really should read my replies... DUH... I thanks your again diana
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Wow, your words are so true! I feel as though God has a plan for all of us and when I need help, I pray to Him and get guidance.

Thank you for sharing. Nicely written!

Tess


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
    thanks so much for your celestial review... this was a strange moment in writing for me... one of those poems that are written automatically... I'm humbled and honored... yours, Diana
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Hello Diana,
You've written a wonderful poem on faith.
Not everyone can open up
and be as honest and straightforward as you are this letter/poem.
There is only one Constant in the universe that I know of
and you've found the source.
If I were He opening this letter, there's be a smile on my face.
Best wishes to you.
Robert


 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
    Thank you RS... you are such a joy... I always welcome your comments and I completely respect your opinion and the stellar/plus-one review is humbling... again thanks. yours, diana
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-Good image and presentation, Diana.
-The poem flows well with
good meter and rhyme, and begins
well with the analogy of the race.
-You continue that with the
thoroughbred, not showing fear.
-The idea of the letter is also
a good one, and you end it well.
-Good luck in the contest.



 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
    Thanks so much, Pam... it is about the thoroughbreds fighting to find its way... always a pleasure.

reply by Pam (respa) on 28-Feb-2019
    You are very welcome, Diana, thanks for sharing.
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Although I like the poem overall, I'm not too sure about the analogy to a horse-race beginning. Having said that, the following stanzas are strident in their resolve to deliver the 'message', still retaining the horse-race analogy. The final stanza seems to me, to be just a 'bit' of a leap from the rest of the poem but it is, for me, what 'makes' the poem. I know that sounds like a contradiction but reflection/imploration focussed towards the spiritual self is creational.

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 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019



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I love how you put in there how you make selfish demands. Not because you make them but because we all make them. This was very real and I think many will be able to relate. I love that it's down to Earth but we totally know what you mean. Great, great job


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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
    Hey Experiencing... thanks for the stellar/plus-one review... I am certainly honored I'm grateful and humbled... yours, diana
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Hello Artasylum
Your letter to the three in one the Thinly)
God, Son and the Holy Ghost, letting them know how rich you feel and have made your life and--
How rich they have made your life...
is an excellent and perfect entry for this Faith Contest.
Gert



 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
    Thanks so much, Gert I always love when you stop by to review... your Diana

reply by Gert sherwood on 27-Feb-2019
    You are welcome Diana
    Gert
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Hi, my dear friend.
Good to be back reading this, for it reveals that openness that lacks in many poems of faith. Not overpowering in its message, but natural is its journey to the reader.

An appreciation within where oneself becomes secondary to the a higher call of importance.
A very well done. Delivered with good poetic aura and feel.

My best wishes....hope this did well for you.
RG


 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
    I'm into honesty lately... I'm needing to read real flaws in writing... So thanks so much kiddo for noticing... No kid gloves or drama just the facts sir... I love that your were here on my site... Your celestial words and the stellar/plus-one review. much humbled... yours, diana
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Hi, Dee. How come I was not notified of this post? I am just seeing it form the first time and I am a fan so I should be getting notices. Hmmm.

Anyway, this is a wonderfully, inspirational piece of writing, my friend. Very well written. I liked this stanza in particular:

"Daily, I try to control my life;
cursing, kicking, on my knees.
Making selfish demands and
hoping raucous rants set me free."

Bless you. Bob


 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
    Hey kiddo... I checked on my end and I am still a fan... so I'm at a loss... I always love when you review. I've been very off and on lately... thanks for reviewing I always look forward to your thought... thanks kiddo... yours, diana

reply by Mastery on 27-Feb-2019
    Thanks, Di. Bob :)
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Ohhhhhh, I so can relate to this poem. All to many times though I think I know what direction God is taking me and I jump right in an take over the journey. . .and then find myself falling off the cliff. Again. I am forever on my knees, thanking Him for helping me pick up the pieces and start all over again. Well-written. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
    Hey moongirlwriter...I am humbled by your words and grateful for your stellar review... I'm glad you had a moment of recognition... it is nice to connect... yours, diana
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