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This is just a wonderful free verse, Diana -- they way your words take the reader from the lowest of the low feelings climbing up through prayer and self-searching to the rising on the tide of a glorious redemption...just beautiful!! :) You've got a really good one here - just what a loop poem should be used for IMHO! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 02-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
    Thanks so much Y.M... I'm always happy to have you review and am grateful for the stars... yours, diana
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I like this form. New to me and a small challenge. I may try it one day. You did a good job on this and I like the message in it a lot also. Blessings, Barbara


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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
    Hey, thanks for your sage review... yours, di
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Wonderful self-reflection loop poem! I liked how you took us from the deep thoughts and returned back to earth and yet not to the fatigue but to a healing redemption. My favorite lines were:
" to my-self.
Self-reflection yields an answer--
answer to my quiet prayers..."


 Comment Written 02-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
    Thanks so much kiddo... so appreciative... yours, diana
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This was a good write, Art Asylum. You had a good flow and excellent imagery in it. The ending was very positive and uplifting. Nice job and good luck in the contest.


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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
    Hey, 24chas... thanks so much and looking forward. yours, diana
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Hi Diana. A well written poem for the contest, but there are some typos that need to be fixed--please take a look:
I am hiding-- (this line is grayed out and font color needs to be changed)
hiding deep inside...
inside my weary soul;
soulfatigue
(from here downward check for errors)
write about my fatigue...
Tonight I sit and write--
that keeps me safe tonight.thatstillhasfight;

Marilyn


 Comment Written 02-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
    Thanks, Beas something (a glitch between word and this page kept happening) was screwing it up... I finally took it all off and retyped on the fanstory page... huff, puff... thanks for the heads up! Diana

reply by BeasPeas on 02-Mar-2019
    I see it is fixed now. Very nice poem and good luck in the contest. Marilyn
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We'll will never know the sweetness of redemption until the Savior we meet. When we meet Him our eternal salvation will be complete.
Patricia


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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
    Thanks ever so pateclaw... yours, diana
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