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Love is The Answer...


time to push back with love...

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papa55mike
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What an awesome poem against bullying. I work in an elementary school, and it seems to be growing. The school has a strict policy against bullying, but the teachers and staff can't be everywhere. It starts with the parents and with some of the junk I see adults using on social media tells you where it starts. Great job.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike


 Comment Written 11-Mar-2019



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    Thanks for such a celestial review... much gratitude to you... ... yours, diana
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An important message delivered in this ABC poem.
It's so sad that children can be so cruel. Where do they learn it?
I like the alliteration throughout your poem as you convey the
various ways bullies operate.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy



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    Thanks for such a celestial review... much gratitude to you... yours, diana
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Thanks for writing on this topic. With three of four grandchildren in various grades at public school I am astounded at the breadth and width and DEPTH of bullying in this technological era! No longer a chant in a schoolyard or an unwelcome shove--children are bombarded through social media to KILL THEMSELVES! How did we get here and how do we turn the tide? One heart at a time, I guess...

Karenina


 Comment Written 10-Mar-2019



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    Thanks for such a celestial review... much gratitude to you... yours, diana

reply by karenina on 14-Mar-2019
    You are most welcome, Diana!--Karenina
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Nice work on this poem, Diane. I thought the message was good in this piece. Kids can very cruel growing up. Hopefully, they learn to be better and those that suffer become more resilient. Thanks for sharing.

Take care,
Russell


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    Thanks for such a celestial review... much gratitude to you... yours, diana
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Well done on keeping this topic to the fore. It is a social scourge, but unfortunately there will always be discrimination and aggression coming from ignorant people. People will be able to stand up for themselves if they learn strategies to deflect unwelcome attention... or else take up track training and become a good sprinter!!
Understanding what a bully's reason for bullying stems from is important... a little love and understanding may be all they need themselves.


 Comment Written 09-Mar-2019



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    Thanks for such a celestial review... much gratitude to you... yours, diana
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A very current topic for a piece of work. Congrats on tackling it on behalf of parents and "the bullied" in society. Line 3 says it very well.

I'm not sure if it was intentional that your title is also a line fom the song "Mind Games" by the late John Lennon, but the lyric fits....

"Love is the answer.... and you know that for sure
Love is a flower
You got to let it, you gotta let it grow"

Bill (WildWithWords)




 Comment Written 09-Mar-2019



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    Thanks for such a celestial review... much gratitude to you... yours, diana
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I could never really understand why someone would bother someone else without provocation. Yet, I remember the bullies quite well. In second grade I changed from victim to perhaps a bully. I really don't know. I stuck up for quite a few kids a long the way. A few didn't think they needed my help, but I just couldn't help myself. I don't know what the answer is to bulling, perhaps love...but I never saw that working for me. Best wishes.


 Comment Written 09-Mar-2019



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    Thanks for such a celestial review... much gratitude to you... yours, diana

reply by victor 66 on 14-Mar-2019
    You are most welcome, and it was my pleasure, Diana. Have a very nice day.
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You are very welcome and I enjoyed your poem very much. It is a great message for all. There is never enough said or done about bullying and if whatever we do helps, thank God. Have a wonderful night. Shirley


 Comment Written 09-Mar-2019



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    Thanks for such a celestial review... much gratitude to you... yours, diana
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You did a great job, with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. I like the alliteration, the color scheme, the word choices. However, it is your message that is so important. Great job. Thanks for sharing and caring. Best wishes. Jan


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    Thanks for such a celestial review... much gratitude to you... yours, diana
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Bullying is and has been a lifelong problem and very hard to stop. I don't know what the answer is. A very well written poem and very well chosen artwork. Cheers. Jen.


 Comment Written 09-Mar-2019



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    Thanks for such a celestial review... much gratitude to you... yours, diana
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