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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Nyoko, Part 2"

One special little boy had a blessed treasure

  2 total reviews 
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Shirley McLain
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A lovely story about a bother and sisters love. It was active and the storyline is excellent. I did not see anything that I would change. Have a good evening. Shirley


 Comment Written 11-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 11-Mar-2019
    Yay, thanks again!
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called2rite
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A tug at the heart type story. I see a lot to read about in the future. Loved the trick off putting stuffed animals on the door. As a kid, we did that with paper cups;... Interesting read. comment made by called2rite on 3-11-19


 Comment Written 11-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 11-Mar-2019
    Aw, thank you. :D
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