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Surrender (your fecund heart)


for Jewell

  15 total reviews 
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Kingsland
 
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if I tried to pass on what you are sying in your poetic verve
they wouldn't have a clue
and if I said it in another fashion
they would think I was full of shit
for those with closed minds
see with blinded eyes
this was a very good piece of poetry... John


 Comment Written 07-Mar-2006


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G.B. Smith
 
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This work has reached the exceptional level
I have to give you a 6 on this because 5 3/4 is not available. I love your work and am envious of your superb talent
Bear


 Comment Written 07-Mar-2006


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Toller
 
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This poem is great. It is well written, beautiful, and very unique. I haven't read anything like this on FS. Nice job!

Sleddog


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2006


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Margokatt
 
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you teased my pocket full of 6s. . .I was so ready to pull one out. . .this is a remarkable write. I have not read poetry quite like this since on FS. Very much enjoy your intelligently crafted phrases. This poem is profound. MK!


 Comment Written 04-Mar-2006


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Alcreator Litt Dear
 
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Yeah, there is no alternative!
Imageries go extensive, sensually wise, learning thrive
Effacious flow, thoughts, clear opening visual on way out
Lovable structural couplets in metrical pull out
Dance with feeling, high pitched conviction sprout


 Comment Written 03-Mar-2006


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I read your bio first. Two things would love to be where you are and its like reading another poetic work. This poem was awesome, deep and unique in style. Hard to review perfection. Thanks for sharing such thoughtful words. Rosie


 Comment Written 03-Mar-2006


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This is probably the best thing my work has been selected to illustrate on this site. The idea is magnificent, the language is very visual and extremely beautiful, and I feel uplifted and bolstered in preparation for the day. Thank you very much for selecting 'Old Wood'...I'm quite honored to be a part of this stunning literary art!

~Margo


 Comment Written 03-Mar-2006


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Senyai
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You are truly a wonderful, poet...I like your work, Blu...I will reread this poem to drain all of it juices again for me to ponder....thank for sharing these sentiments.

Show by it and with it, in powder and crucible,
more merely than firing could,
the commonplace beauty of metal,

and a joy in the smell of wood.
These are are beautiful...

all the best to you






 Comment Written 03-Mar-2006


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Lisloh
 
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This is phenomenal. There is no other word created to describe this, Webster cut it too short...

The word [surrender] has been a visitation in my life lately and it's all wrapped around the word [love].

If we don't choose to surrender, what else is there?
God, this is good.
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh

Superb presentation.

How to just be,
considering that which the learned would have us believe

which the ego would take and uncover a word for,
or read into sayings of others.


I could write volumes on those lines, and probably already have.
The ego must die!


 Comment Written 02-Mar-2006


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staceyc
 
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Your poems speak so many words that say so much. I just love reading them. Excellent job! Keep up the writing as I love reading your poems.
staceyc


 Comment Written 02-Mar-2006


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