if I tried to pass on what you are sying in your poetic verve
they wouldn't have a clue
and if I said it in another fashion
they would think I was full of shit
for those with closed minds
see with blinded eyes
this was a very good piece of poetry... John
you teased my pocket full of 6s. . .I was so ready to pull one out. . .this is a remarkable write. I have not read poetry quite like this since on FS. Very much enjoy your intelligently crafted phrases. This poem is profound. MK!
Yeah, there is no alternative!
Imageries go extensive, sensually wise, learning thrive
Effacious flow, thoughts, clear opening visual on way out
Lovable structural couplets in metrical pull out
Dance with feeling, high pitched conviction sprout
I read your bio first. Two things would love to be where you are and its like reading another poetic work. This poem was awesome, deep and unique in style. Hard to review perfection. Thanks for sharing such thoughtful words. Rosie
This is probably the best thing my work has been selected to illustrate on this site. The idea is magnificent, the language is very visual and extremely beautiful, and I feel uplifted and bolstered in preparation for the day. Thank you very much for selecting 'Old Wood'...I'm quite honored to be a part of this stunning literary art!