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What Time is It...


Season... Lunar... Greenwich...

  22 total reviews 
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A. Willow Bends
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How unique and said so well in so few words. I love it. Is that an oxymoron? NOW I need to go look THAT up! At any rate, you chose a great topic for this short piece and your visual goes very well with your words. VERY thought provoking. Like it!
Wendy


 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019


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you are so right, even Einstein didn't really get it. I like his ideas about bending it and turning it inside out, though. good luck in the one line thing..


 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019


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Have to agree with you. We all handle it in different ways, which means it is the most misunderstood, understanding. You got it right. We could exemplify all day but that is not necessary. Our minds are at work. Well done!


 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019


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True unless you look at nature, the spring equinox is the 20th, and unless you have a Rolex, you shouldn't travel, because, you will be in daylight saving time.


 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019


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Pink Petals
 
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Very true. When we waste it we can never get it back. When we need it, we can't get it back, when it's gone, we cam never get it back, and yet there is no time like the present to make us aware of time.

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 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019


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Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You have correctly used one line.
-I like your topic, and the message.
-It is creative with the opposite
words describing the same thing.
-The alliteration is effective, too.
-Put it together, and it all makes sense!
-Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019


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Hi, I recommend adding a period to your excellent thought and sentence. This a great idea and picture for your Monostich poem! Ideal creativity! Deborah


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019


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This statement hits home with me. I like Standard time...that's what there was when I was born. Keep it that way, I say. I now see what a monostich poem is, and am glad to learn something new to me. Great artwork! I wish you the best in the contest!!


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    Hey Miss Sherry... thanks for reading... I'm in gratitude... yours, diana
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Maria Jose Garcia
 
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Hi,
I love the presentation of your poem and the topic you've chosen. I have a question though: are you sure you wanted to write a comma after misunderstood?
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    This is was just fun to write and dress up with the right art... thank you, thank you Maria...
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Kerry Robinson
 
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Oooooh... Very nice, a most profound one-liner, my friend. This is a great contender in the contest. You've said so much with so few words. Nicely done! ~Kerry


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    This is was just fun to write and dress up with the right art... thank you, thank you
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