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Somewhere Over the Rainbow


I feel like I can fly...

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C. Gale Burnett
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I love how you expressed going from a down-spiral back up ... negative thoughts and feelings to strength and transformation. A beautiful 'Loop.' The last five lines were beautiful and full of hope for the reader.
Well done and a perfect contest entry!


 Comment Written 03-Apr-2019


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Sugarray77
Melissa
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Hey there! You have written a wonderful verse full of color and light. I would mention that the Loop Poetry form is structured where the word that is repeated is the last word of the line being the first word of the next line. For example... Doubt...
the word doubt should be the first word in the second line as well. It is a wonderful poem you have crafted!

Melissa


 Comment Written 12-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
    What a luv you are Sugarray... I cut and paste the poem and posted without checking... there must have been strange instructions embedded ad the whole thing went haywire!!!! Thanks for letting meknow...
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His Grayness
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Certainly many thanks for the introduction to this style of writing and well done in all ways indeed, so please keep the fine works coming often! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance


 Comment Written 12-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    Thanks kiddo... you are very kind!
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