I love how you expressed going from a down-spiral back up ... negative thoughts and feelings to strength and transformation. A beautiful 'Loop.' The last five lines were beautiful and full of hope for the reader.
Well done and a perfect contest entry!
Hey there! You have written a wonderful verse full of color and light. I would mention that the Loop Poetry form is structured where the word that is repeated is the last word of the line being the first word of the next line. For example... Doubt...
the word doubt should be the first word in the second line as well. It is a wonderful poem you have crafted!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
What a luv you are Sugarray... I cut and paste the poem and posted without checking... there must have been strange instructions embedded ad the whole thing went haywire!!!! Thanks for letting meknow...