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Pathway to Love


Her peace defined, Adewpearl (audio Poem)

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Comment by
artisart4u
 
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This is a nice poem about someone you truly admired.
I like how she was transformed from one type of person to another during her walk on the pathway to love. Maybe accepting things you can't change.
In your poem, "She stayed shore ...," could be an answer.
Again I will say the poem of nice and it has good rhymes.
Good luck with it and congratulations on your All Time Best and be recognized.


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
    Dear author, thank you so much., it has been a while since this review with my absence over a year. I have set up a one month subscription to see how it goes and to say thank you so much for your review of this work. I have a few reviews old outstanding to thank for, so most will have this message yet, it is of the same utmost gratitude to each. Thank you so much, please have a wonderful day. RGstar
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Pathway to Love - what a beautiful piece. I felt so calm whilst reading this. The pace of the poem, whilst at the same time including so much, was a pleasure to read. I loved the image you chose - loved the warm tones and meandering road.


 Comment Written 07-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
    Dear author, thank you so much., it has been a while since this review with my absence over a year. I have set up a one month subscription to see how it goes and to say thank you so much for your review of this work. I have a few reviews old outstanding to thank for, so most will have this message yet, it is of the same utmost gratitude to each. Thank you so much, please have a wonderful day. RGstar
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I know I am getting low on my sixes. but when read a poem and gets me weeping I know you done wrote one he'll of a poem. That's not counting the great picture you chose to go along with it.


 Comment Written 26-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
    Dear author, thank you so much., it has been a while since this review with my absence over a year. I have set up a one month subscription to see how it goes and to say thank you so much for your review of this work. I have a few reviews old outstanding to thank for, so most will have this message yet, it is of the same utmost gratitude to each. Thank you so much, please have a wonderful day. RGstar
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It is with a heavy, heavy heart that I write this review. I am deeply saddened.

Until I read your poem, I did not know that Brooke made her transition. As I mentioned previously, like you, I have been away from the site.

I knew she was ill, but I was praying that she will return to the site one day. Of course, her spirit and exceptional work live on.

As for your poem, you captured the essence of Brooke's heart and soul with beauty and delicacy. The usage of flowers, your signature in your poetry, make the readers feel her softness and compassion for all.
Even members who never knew become acquainted with her by this poem.

Also, you allow the reader to enter that sacred place of your dear friendship with Brooke. Collectively, your words speak for all who knew her, but I felt that individual connection you had with Brooke. She was dear to me, too.

Of course, with your well-woven, well-chosen words , you send her to pathway to love, a place so gentle and tranquil like Brooke.

I am moved to tears by this poem, Roy. You poured your heart and soul in this poem. Brooke is smiling, and so am I.

Thank you, thank you, thank you. Brooke deserves this poem of exquisiteness.


 Comment Written 13-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
    yes...thank you so much my dear friend...i know your heart...we dont have so long on this Earth and we often realize too late...not sure if that is a good thing or bad. :) You should have saved your sixes, but I thank you. I will release a poem tonight. I actually thought about you and your mother when writing a brief second, hoping all was well.. Thanks for the six.
    Best wishes.
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Thank you for your double, rhymed tribute to Brooke, both past and present. I am delighted to learn that she helped to inspire you with your audio work. Your title and picture establish the mood well. I admired your word choices and imagery and raise my "cup" to salute her. Best wishes in the contest with this winning post--I only wish I had the six stars it deserves- Joan


 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 13-Apr-2019
    Thank you for going back to this, Joan...brooke was special to many..this , in fact, was my fouth poem for Broke during my time here.
    Thank you so much.
    My best wishes
    RGstar

reply by Joan E. on 13-Apr-2019
    Thank you again for giving Brooke the recognition she so heartily deserves. May she rest with the angels- Joan
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Hello RG, your poem and tribute to Brooke, our brightest star, is filled with great alliteration and the softest imagery. Brooke is/was our star. Her shoes will be hard to fill. She had the kindest heart, and she always saw the good, and positive, in others. She shared her knowledge wholeheartedly. Her love and goodness will survive forevermore. I especially liked:

a brief touch of pink violets that flow
Asleep in dreams of bygone days and grandson's ways;
(Brooke grandson was truly "the light of her life.")

Well chosen artwork choice. Sadly, I could not get the audio to play, but as I read your poem, your distinguished voice came through. A poem of gratitude and loving memories. Keep the blue waters flowing. RG, your writing is exceptional. Please accept my virtual 10 as well as my apologies for such a late review. Brooke will be missed by many. Sincerely, LateBloomer


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Wow, so good to hear from you. I thought there was something missing. I hd been away a few months, but good to be seeing you here. Trying to motovate. Thank you so much for the six star and for going back to this.
    Lookng forward to reading from you soon.
    My best wishes.
    RG

reply by LateBloomer on 27-Mar-2019
    Thanks RG, I'm doing well. These days, my four-year old grandson takes up so much of my time. He is a joy as well as my sunshine. At the end of the day, there's not much time left for FS, but I keep trying. Smile, LateBloomer

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
    Yes, dont disappear...hope you can combine, its a pleasure knowing you.
    Have a great dday with grandson.
    My best
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My last six of the week, and I can't think of a nicer poem to award it to.

This is a beautiful tribute to Brooke, RG. She was indeed a friend to all on Fanstory ... always kind and helpful. It's always sad when we lose one of our poet friends. Though we don't meet in person, we get a glimpse of their life through their writing.

I especially love your last stanza. To me, that really speaks of Brooke and how she loved to write about her "grandson's ways". "a wish, or suppose" ... really luv this ... almost whimsical!

So very nice, RG!

Cheers,
Connie


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Good to hear from yoou my dearest friend. Hope all with well with the family. Looking forward to read some of your summer escapades on holiday.
    My best.
    Thank you so much for the kind words and six stars.
    My best wishes.
    RG
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Your poetry just sings, RG! I didn't know Brooke but you showed me her heart with this poem. Thank you also for the vocabulary. I just learned from Tony recently how you love "petrichor" which I recently learned was coined by Aussie scientists. Really well done!


 Comment Written 20-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Thank you. Sorry so log to reply. I really appreciate your feedback.
    My very best to you.
    Enjoy your Sunday.#
    My best
    RGstar

reply by lyenochka on 24-Mar-2019
    You're most welcome, RG. By the way, have you heard anything about Portia? (pharp) She's been gone for such a long time.

reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    No. I spoke to her a few months ago, and there were some medical decisions to make, but have not heard anything since. I may drop her an email to see if all ok. My best wishes

reply by lyenochka on 24-Mar-2019
    Thanks, RG. Please give her my regards if you email her. Blessings to you, too!

reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    I will. Ansd yes, I love the word, petrichor.
    I think I introduced it to FS, never used before, and now I see it used a couple of times. Thank you Ausie scientists :)
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RG this poem is truly breathtaking. Gorgeous verses throughout. I know you penned this beauty in honour of Brooke, sadly someone I was not privileged to get to know. I am a newcomer here but it has takenong for me to realise there are sime very special writers znd human beings among this crew.

I have no doubt that Brook, wherever she be, is smiling broadly at this gorgeous verse.

It was a privilege to read this.

Best
John


 Comment Written 20-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Thank you author. Good to see your enthusiasm. In time you will navigate and find the importance. Keep the positive.
    Thank you so much for your kind review and six stars.
    My best wishes.
    RGstar
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I need a six for this one but fresh out. Brooke was my buddy too. She was great help in various ways. This is a beautiful tribute.
With fresh allure meanders a brackish breeze through hollows of my heart
Within its murmur, soft whisperings and forebodings, with aim to tear me apart
But oh, to remember bright days in September when, she, a late season sought
Awaiting grey, with rhyme she'd belay such words of beauty to every thought


 Comment Written 20-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Thank youBen. Together with Brooke, you are one of the stalwarts of Fanstory.
    My very best to you and family. Sorry for the late reply.
    My best wishes.
    RGstar
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