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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


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Teri,

This is a beautiful tribute for Brooke. I particularly liked the first two lines of the poem. It sets the tone beautifully.

ove and peace
With no more pain and lots of relief
She is with the One that loves her so

Ray


 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019



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    Thank you so much Ray for the great review and very lovely comments! Blessings, Teri
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Hello Teri: I enjoyed reading your wonderful tribute to Brooke. She was an amazing lady as we all know. And, as you said, she had a strong faith in God. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us...Bill


 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
    Thank you so much Bill for the great review and very nice comments! Blessings, Teri
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Her kindness and her poetry will live on in Fanstorian history and hearts. Nice tribute with simply rhyme and meter, well composed. She must be smiling reading this over your shoulder! Lovely.

RIP

Blessings,
Rd


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



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    Thank you so much my friend for the great review and very lovely comments. love and blessings, Teri

reply by rama devi on 17-Mar-2019
    ;-) Love and blessings!
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I have read every poem she has written since I joined here .she used to post two poems per week
she was a pastmaster in rhyming and in using perfect meter.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



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    Thank you so much for the great review and very lovely comments! love and blessings, Teri
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So sad, I was away for two years, and I knew Brook through our writing. She adored her grandson Sawyer, and I still remember her name and her grandson's name. It is an honor for me to read her past through your writings. Thank You. Terry xoxo


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    Thank you so much for the great review and lovely comments! love and blessings, Teri
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Hi Teri,

Awwww - This is such sweet sentiment about your dear friend and sister poet, Brooke. I did not get to know her, so you are certainly fortunate for that. Your poem of rememberance is lovely and well written.

Thanks for sharing.

Jan


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



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    Thank you so much for the great review and very nice comments. love and blessings, Teri
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Oh Teri, this is lovely--a wonderful tribute to a kind and generous friend. She has been missed since she took ill in 2015, but that was different. I think many of us were hoping she would return (except those who knew what the diagnosis was, exactly).

Well done, my friend.


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    Thank you so much my friend! love and blessings, Teri
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Thank you for these kind words about her. I never knew Brooke, but plan to go to her page and read her pieces. I enjoyed reading about her and think this is a lovely memorial, Teri.

Melissa



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    Thank you so much Melissa for the great review and very lovely comments. love and blessings, Teri
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A beautifully written dedication to a dear lady, a lady in every aspect of the word. You have written a lovely tribute to them my friend. She's been promoted to glory, so her reward is great, well done,Teri, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



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    Thank you so much my friend for the great review, lovely comments and pretty six stars! May God bless you my friend! Teri

reply by royowen on 16-Mar-2019
    Most welcome Teri
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Hi Teri. This is a lovely tribute to Brooke. I didn't know her, but have heard a great deal about her and how she helped others and was kind. It's sad to lose one of our members. Marilyn


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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Thank you so much my friend for the great review and very lovely comments! love and blessings, Teri
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