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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Dandelions In Heaven"

a collection of posts honoring a friend

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Louise Michelle
 
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This is so lovely, Linda. How we all loved Brooke. Your piece brought back little memory flashes for me.

I'm not sure why you're apologizing in the notes. The image is exquisite and the body of your poem is presented perfectly. Hugs, Lou


 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Hi Lou, I was always hoping she would show up in my pm one day....she was so loved....and she loved everyone...so many writers/poets are passing away....or just leaving...sigh....thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...I know Brooke is at peace in Heaven....love you...Linda xxoo
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Hi Linda,

I enjoyed your poem for Brooke. It's heart-felt and sums up how so very many of us felt about Brooke. The following lines speak a universal truth about Brooke.
How do you say goodbye to someone
you didn't want to leave?

I missed Brooke from the first day she left.
Always hoping and praying she would return.

She was an amazing and brilliant lady.
So talented in her love for writing poetry, and stories.

Thanks for sharing.
Ray


 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Hi Ray, I knew she was sick...I knew she had a massive stroke...but I was hoping she would come on the site once in awhile...I so miss her...she was a classy chick...I know she is in Heaven with some wonderful company...and her and Michael were good friends...thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
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A Eulogy fit for a heavenly person. Although I wasn't here when Brooke was, I can certainly feel the essence of her being, through your lovely poem. Your sentiments are beautifully formed and echo the sadness you are experiencing.
God Bless you!


 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Hi Raffaelina, I'm so sorry you missed knowing Brooke...she was a wonderful person to everyone...she was a teacher on here...in her class and on the site...she was a brilliant writer....you can still go to her profile and read her poetry...you will love it it...I promise...thank you for a wonderful review...and all your lovely stars...so ggod to meet you...love Linda xxoo
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She was some lady, always on hand to give advice and helpful comments. She stopped me quitting when I got my first bad review. I will miss her. Thank you for sharing, she would have loved it.


 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Hi DMT, she was so good with so many...she would come when I posted a poem...and she would correct my mistakes...she made me laugh...and I loved teasing her about her wonderful dandelions...she called beautiful flowers...and I called them weeds...but I think she won...because after awhile I started seeing them as pretty...LOL...I miss her so...and know so many do too...thank you sweet girl for your wonderful review...and all your lovely stars...and you are so welcome...it is so good to see you....love Linda xxoo
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Beautiful tribute to a lady I had much respect for. Haven't been able to post much the past few years so I'm just now finding out that she passed. God bless her. She was always so kind in her reviews of my poems and correcting my punctuation. Lol In the beginning I didn't know she was an English teacher, so that made her reviews even more treasured. This was a fine salute to her and I'm sure she would've been very touched. Well done.


 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Hi Suzie, I was hoping she would show up on my pm...or just to correct another one of the mistakes I would make...she helped everyone...in her classes...and on the site...I miss her so much...she was amazing...a wonderful teacher...and a writer...but she is with Michael Cahill...and they were good friends...sigh...thank you for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
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Hello Linda,
A beautiful poem and tribute for Brooke.
I'm sure she is in Heaven right now, blowing dandelion seeds for Sawyer
and all her friends on fanstory.
Her kindness and love are like the ripples of a seed on a pond,
they never end.
Gorgeous presentation, too.
So many beautiful tributes for Brooke.
Robert


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Hi Robert, yes there are...it is wonderful all the lovely poems/stories written to...and about her...I sure miss her...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...Love Linda xxoo
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-Beautiful artwork, Linda,
Brooke would love it,
as well as your poem.
-I felt the same way you did
when she first left.
-I think we all wanted her to
be well and come back to us.
-Thanks for sharing your
fond memories of her and Sawyer,
and her kindness and talent.
-I think she is smiling as each
piece is posted.


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Hi Pam, I think she is to...there are so many wonderful poems/stories written for her...I just miss her...still waiting for her to correct my poem mistakes...she always made me laugh...sigh...thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...love you Linda xxoo

reply by Pam (respa) on 19-Mar-2019
    You are very welcome, Linda. Brooke was a very special person. I think she is enjoying all of these poems and reviews of them, and sharing a smile or two.

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
    I'm sure she is...that would be her...have a wonderful day sweet girl...love xxoo

reply by Pam (respa) on 19-Mar-2019
    You do the same, Linda.
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Beautiful words along with the perfect picture to tell about Brooke. Great job of telling everyone on fanstory tour thoughts about her. These words show your love and admiration for her. Thanks for sharing and God bless.


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Hi George, I am so heart broken she never returned...she was a lovely lady...I know she is at peace with God now...her and Michael, and Gungalo (Pam)...and so many others...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...Love Linda xxoo
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What a very lovely tribute to Brooke, Linda. You have captured much here of what we all found exceptional about her, and the simple straightforwardness of your words is compelling. I'm sure that Miranda and Sawyer will treasure your poem and find great comfort in the sentiments you have expressed so well.


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Hi Tony, thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...I know she is in seven heaven with all the lovey poems and stories being written...they are amazing...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
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A very noble tribute of someone who meant a lot to you. You described her passions, dreams, and hopes. I didn't know her. Good rhyming poem. Thanks for sharing. called2rite comment made on 3-18-19.


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Hi Calledtorite, she was a wonderful teacher...and a wonderful friend....I was always hoping she would come back...if you go to her profile...you can still read her poetry...you won't be disappointed...I promise...thank you for a wonderful review....love Linda xxoo so good to meet you...
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