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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Dandelions In Heaven"

a collection of posts honoring a friend

  81 total reviews 
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kiwigirl2821
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These are the hard ones
The ones that make us cry
So damn hard to say good bye
Somehow you have managed to write a wonderful tribute to an amazing woman who blessed our world. She was one chill woman, so sweet and sincere and I honestly don't think she knew how to be mean or unfair. I loved this write Linda as I think you've summed it up for many of us. Brooke was first class all the way. Take care of yourself luvy! xoxo deborah


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Hi Deborah, this one truly made us cry...I was always hoping that one day she would show up on my pm...Maureen as well...she was a classy chick...would come and make corrections on my posted poems...she always made me laugh...so miss her...thank you sweet girl for all your wonderful stars...and a wonderful review my sweet friend...you take care as well...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
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A moving tribute to a poet and friend (whom I did not know) on this site. I liked the images and metaphor in your poem. Simple and from the heart words


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Hi Donka, Brooks (adewpearl) profile is still up...she was one of the top poet.writers on FanStory...you can still go read her writers...you won't be disappointed...I promise...thank you for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
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This is so beautiful! I didn't have the privilege of knowing Brooke and haven't read any of her writings, but can tell by your words that she was a true friend and touched your heart. The presentation is lovely and the words flow so smoothly. Thank you for sharing this. Blessings, Cathy


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Hi Cathy, Brooke not only was a teacher on FanStory...she was one of the top poets/writers...her profile is still up...you should go read her writes...you won't be disappointed...I promise...thank you for a wonderful review...and you are so very welcome...love you...Linda xxoo
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Thank you so much, Linda. This poem is absolutely beautiful.
The theme, words and artwork define Brook so well. I miss
Brooke too - she was very special, talented and kind.
Your poem is a wonderful tribute for all of us here and for
her family and friends. The artwork you used is just lovely and
I know she would love it. My prayers & love are with her. And
once again I thank you for this beautiful poem.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Hi Maria, how are you doing sweet girl?...so good to see you...
    like so many...I miss her...her and her dandelions lit up FanStory... she was a wonderful lady...and so very talented...I always hoped and prayed one day she would pop up in my pm...thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review my sweet friend...love much...Linda xxoo
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Hello l.raven (Linda)
Smiles to your poem telling us how much
(adewpearl) will be missed the title to your poem/prayer is perfect.
I just hope there are
Dandelions In Heaven
Gert


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Hi Gert, so do I...I do miss her...sense the day she got sick...sigh...thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review my sweet friend...and how are you doing???...love you...Linda xxoo
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OMG. I had not heard of her passing. Brooke was my mentor, my teacher and my friend. She was also my inspiration. I bless the day she came into my life. She said that she recognized a talent in me that only needed development and she gave me a scholarship to take some classes from her at no cost to me. AI still benefit from those classes. I will love Brooke Baldwin until the day of my own death. She meant the world to me and I think of her often. Rest in Paradise my dear, dear friend.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Hi Nolan, I have missed her from the day she left...I would hope and prayer one day she would pop up in my pm...I used to tease her about dandelions being weeds...her and my granddaughter loved them...she said my granddaughter had good taste...LOL...and I loved her ten count poems as well...I never told a class from her Nolan...but with every poem I posted...she would come a correct it...explain what was wrong...I am heartbroken...tears my sweet friend...I miss her like so many do...we were blessed to have her on the site...and have her as a friend...thank you for a wonderful review...and all your lovely stars...I'll sent them all to Brooke...love Linda xxoo
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A very touching and loving memory of a fanstory friend and teacher. I wish all fanstory friends the best and when does leave this world that they are remembered. God Bless us all!!!


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Hi Yvon, she was an amazing lady...and will be so missed...thank you for a wonderful review...God Bless...love Linda xxoo

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I first wish to give my regrets, hoping perhaps I reviewed one of her writes, ascending my feeling with those views expressed to family. All in my opinion of this work.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Thank you so very much TPAC for a wonderful review...it is truly heartbreaking...Brooke will be so missed...sigh...love Linda xxoo
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Very nice tribute, that I am touched Brooke's heart as she read it over your shoulder while you wrote it! :)

She was a gem, for sure. Brooke's kindness and poetry will live on in Fanstorian history and hearts.

Thanks for this touching and lovely contribution to the book.

Blessings,
rd


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Hi Rama Devi, I used to love when she would come to my site...she made me laugh...not only was so teaching me...she was teaching so many others...sigh...she was some classy chick...and I miss her so...was always hoping and praying she would show up on my pm again...but one thing I do know...she is now at peace in Heaven...her, Michael Cahill, and many others...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...I hope you are doing well...love you...Linda xxoo

reply by rama devi on 20-Mar-2019
    She was the classiest in helpful kindness! She is surely in Peace and playing with MC! Love you too, dear. Fairly well. Happy. Hope the same for you. Hugs, rd

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    big hugs back at you...xxoo love

reply by rama devi on 20-Mar-2019
    xxxxooooo
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A wonderful tribute to our dear friend and mentor, adewpearl. Your covered her talents and impacts beautifully here, with the main features of dandelions and Sawyer. I concur that we all prayer for her return, now we'll pray for her soul in heaven, where she belongs. So very well said here in this free verse tribute.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Hi Tom, yes she does belong in Heaven my sweet friend...she will be so missed...I know I miss her...but I was grateful for the pictures Robyn posted of her and Sawyer...I was always wondering if she was about to do things with him...made me smile...she is with so wonderful FanStory writers...thank you so much for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
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