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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Dandelions In Heaven"

a collection of posts honoring a friend

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OH my God. I just read your poem so sad that Brook passed away. She was so sweet. And she adored Sawyer. We both enjoyed writing to each other. She will be never forgotten. Love u Terry xoxo


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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Hi Terry, I am heartbroken my sweet friend...I was always hoping she would show up in my pm one day...and no sweet girl...she will never be forgotten...she helped so many on here...I miss her like so many do...thank you beautiful lady for a wonderful review...and all your lovely stars...God Bless...and I hope you are doing well...love you lots...Linda xxoo
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Beautiful sentiments, well said. Did you live near her or reminiscing about just your Fanstory relationship? I remember her and others from when I participated more. Lots of good people on this site.
God bless you and thanks for sharing this beautiful remembrance!


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Hi Dave, No!!! I live in Illinois...and she was in Calif...I had talked to her a few times...but it was after she was so sick...she said she knew who I was...she was just a wonderful friend...and teacher...even though I didn't take her class....whenever I posted a poem...she would come and correct my mistakes...she made me laugh...she was amazing...and I loved reading her poetry...I miss her like so many...and you are so right my sweet friend...there are alot of good people on this site...she is now in Heaven with Michael Cahill...and they were good friends...there are a lot of FanStory writers up there...sigh...thank you sweet guy for a wonderful review...and all your wonderful stars...so good to see you always...love to you...Linda xxoo
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I am also so sorry that brooke has left us for ever. I used to check fanstory if there was any news of her .
since I was away I got this news only now.
I loved her poems.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    HI Sanka, it is just heartbreaking...I was always hoping she would come back again and show up in my pm....Michael Cahill and her were good friends...and they are now in Heaven together...sigh...thank you for a wonderful review...and it is so good to see you...love you...Linda xxoo
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This is a lovely tribute to Brooke, and so beautifully composed. A very sweet tribute to what sounds like such a beautiful life. I like how you put a lot of thought into each line and made it tight. You pointed out some great qualities and things to remember her by. Very excellent. It held my attention.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Ross, she was such a blessing to FanStory...she was a shinning light...and a big smile...I miss her so much like many do...sigh...thank you for a wonderful review sweet guy...love Linda xxoo
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Such a lovely tribute to your online friend. I felt like I knew Brooke after reading this. So sad to hear she died. Online friends can be closer than real life friends in some ways. We share our inner most thoughts and feelings through our writing.

And I love the animation. So lovely and goes so well with your words. Beautifully written!


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Cat, you are so right...many of the written have said...they know some people on FanStory better than they know some of their family...if you get time...go read her poetry...she was amazing...and will truly be missed...thank you so much for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
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A wonderful tribute to your dear friend. Inspiring on a Sunday morning. Saying good-bye is so tough, but the pain of it should remind us to maximize our time and sharing with those special to us while we can. I was given this thought years ago at the passing of someone special: "Never let the sorrow of good-bye diminish the joy of your time together." Enjoy your day and others...


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Reese, I guess everyone has to grieve in their own time...and then you save it in your heart...know we will see them again...sigh...she was someone very special on FanStory...thank you for a wonderful review...and you have a great day...love Linda xxoo
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Hi Linda
What a wonderful tribute that you have written to Brooke. It is so perfectly worded. It is so sad to lose a love one and the older you get it happens more and more. Take care. Love. Jen. X


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Jen, that is so true...I have never seen death like I do now...and I hate it...sigh...thank you so my my sweet friend for a wonderful review...I miss Brooke so much...love you...Linda xxoo
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Ignoring the poetry aspect of the post, I want to join you in your wonderful tribute to your friend, Brooke. I did not know her, but out of respect for a writer I have a deep respect for (yourself) I send commiserations and condolences for your loss.

Your friend....

Bill (WildWithWords)


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Bill, she was an amazing person...and a wonderful friend...to say the least...and awesome teacher...you can go read her poetry...her profile is open eternally...you will love her writing/poetry...I promise...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review....love Linda xxoo
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Linda, this is a lovely tribute to Brooke. I miss her too. I always told her to find a publisher for her children's poetry. Perhaps Miranda will do that one day. Brooke's talent was unique. She was a real master of the art.


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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Phyllis, I was always hoping she would show up in my pm one day...her and Maureen...I still go to her (Maureen's profile) to see if she has checked in...I leave her little notes...I miss them both so very much...Gungalo...and now Michael as well...sigh...I wish she had published one as well...I loved her ten count poems...thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...love you...Linda xxoo
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...and blowing dandelion clocks...
Nice heartfelt memorial to someone we all loved at FS. When I first saw her FS name, I took it to be a twist on "adieu Pearl"... I suppose it is that now.
Thanks for this piece. It reminded me of what we will all miss.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Sally, she was an amazing lady...I was Always hoping she would show up in my pm again...I know we will all miss her....thank you for a wonderful review....and you are so welcome....love you....Linda xxoo
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