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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Dandelions In Heaven"

a collection of posts honoring a friend

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Liberty Justice
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SIX STARS 6******Linda what a sweet sad poem and I am trying not to cry because its so sad to lose a fellow fan story writer. She makes 2 now. What condition did she have? HOW are you doing? lolol liberty justice


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Hi Liberty, she had a massive stroke...after that she wasn't able to write anymore...so she went to be by her daughter...I talked to her about three times...she said remembered me...she was a wonderful teacher...and a wonderful friend...I miss her so much...but she is in Heaven with Michael Cahill...and many other FanStory poets...May They All Rest In Peace....thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...and all your wonderful stars...I am doing well...it is one day a time for us all...I how you are doing well too...God Bless....love you...Linda xxoo
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"Dandelions In Heaven", is an exceptionally well-written and wonderfully fitting tribute, to a wonderful writer and teacher. Over the years she taught me so very much. When I think of alliteration, I think of Brooke. Now with God, she'll truly be at rest. I wish I had a seven for this talented poet. Unfortunately I only have fives left.


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Duchess, just the thought of your seven is more than enough.....I was always waiting for her to show up in my pm....she would always come and correct my mistakes....I miss her so much....but I know she is truly at peace in Heaven....thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend....God Bless sweet girl....love you much....Linda. xxoo

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Linda, you're very welcome.

    I miss Brooke so much to. She was the best reviewer Fanstory has ever had.

    Now she's resting in peace. God bless her,
    the Duchess xxoo

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Yes she was....I?m glad she?s with God...sigh...xxoo love

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 21-Mar-2019
    Linda, my possum, this is so very true.

    Take care, God bless you and have a wonderful week end.
    the Duchess xxoo


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    You have a wonderful weekend as well....much love. xxoo

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 21-Mar-2019
    Certainly a one off. Now with God.

    Take care and bless you possum,
    the Duchess xxoo

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 21-Mar-2019

    I'll try my pen-pushing friend.

    Bless you and hugs,
    the Duchess xxoo
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This piece made me cry... your memories of Brooke are shared by many many fanstorians here . God bless you for writing such a beautiful piece about a wonderful person who will be dearly missed .
Judy


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Hi Judy, I have been crying as well...Brooke was a wonderful friend...and I miss her dearly...Thank You sweet girl for all your wonderful stars...and a wonderful review...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
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This is a really beautiful poem,Linda...and I am so very sorry for your loss. My deepest condolences to you. I am sure Brooke will be reading your poem from heaven. Thanks for sharing this. Love Geetha


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Hi Geetha, thank you so much for your kind words sweet girl...I know she will love all the wonderful poems written for her...thank you for a wonderful review....and you are so welcome...love you...Linda xxoo
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Beautiful write. I had to change my review a little here as I realized it wasn't you Brooke spoke to about my poetry, but Flylikeaneagle, so I appologise for the mix up, yet, so beautiful is this written it is more than worthy of the words, and a pleasure to read.
She was special to us, dear friend, as she was to many others.


Beautifully written.
Such a sad time.
My very best wishes.
RG


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Hi Roy, I was hoping one day she would show up in my pm...she was an amazing lady...who helped so many...I miss her so much my sweet friend....but she is with good company...thank you for a wonderful review sweet guy...and best wishes to you as well...love Linda xxoo
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I'm not sure what you're misgivings are about this posting. I knew Brooke not very well, but she always had very positive criticism that was most appreciated. I think this is a beautiful tribute. Best wishes. Linda.


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Hi Victor, thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...and all your wonderful stars...she was truly an amazing lady...and so very talented....she would have done anything for anyone...best wishes to you as well...love Linda xxoo

reply by victor 66 on 21-Mar-2019
    You are most welcome, Linda. If my Christian friends are correct, we'll get to see Brooke again. That is if they let me in. Take care.

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    I'm sure they will let you in...God is a forgiving God...just believe...and I have no doubt we will all see each other again...you take care as well...love xxoo
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Hi Linda,

Oh, this is such a loving and sweet tribute to your dear friend who has passed away. I am sorry I didn't have the opportunity to get to know Brooke as I've recently returned to the site after being away for 10+ years.

From your notes, I gather you are aware that there is a lot of white space before and after your text. Have ypu tried editing and backspacing or deleting before and after text? Blank space doesn't always show up in edit mode.

Thanks for sharing.

Jan


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Hi Jan, I tried to fix it and it made it worse...LOL...I always wanted her to show back up in my pm...she was a wonderful teacher...and a wonderful friend to everyone...you can read her poems...her site is staying up...I think you will love her writings...thank you for a wonderful review...and you are so very welcome...love you...Linda xxoo
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Best of the best indeed. I was proud to call her my friend, and yes, I even wrote a poem about a man who enjoyed mowing dandelions as a gentle tease on the topic.

I can well remember how stunned all Fanstorians were when she was first taken from us by a seemingly inexplicable disease, and now we get to mourn all over again.

Your poem is a lovely tribute to the one and only AdewPearl

Steve


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Steve, I was always waiting for her to show up on my pm....wihen ever I would post a poem she would come and correct it....she made me laugh....I miss her so....as so many do...but I know she is truly in Heaven...thank you so much for a wonderful review....love Linda xxoo
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Linda: did you take any classes from Brooke? I took her children poetry
one on one class. She loved Sawyer and dandelions and worms that smiled.
Yes, classy lady and always ready to help us. Her poems were always
well written. She spent hours on FS and adored everyone. I'm sure she
is writing poetry in Heaven. flylikeaneagle


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Nancy, I never took her classes...now I wish I had....but whenever I would post a poem....she would come and correct My mistakes.....she made me laugh....she truly did love Sawyer and dandelions....and yes worm that smiled....she was amazing....and I miss her....she loved everyone....and they loved her...I know she is now in Heaven....thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend....love you sweet girl....xxoo
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Linda, this is such a beautiful tribute to Brooke. I am sure so few of us are left that remember her. She was not only a great poet but an excellent mentor. It's odd how attached you can get to someone you've never met through their writings. I remember her love of Sawyer like it was yesterday. I only hope her passing was peaceful and without pain. You are truly a great friend to have written this for her. Hugs and Love Val


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Val, I always waited for her to show up in my pm... I tell new comers to go to her site and read her poems....that she was amazing...and I am so glad the pictures Robyn has been posting of Brooke and Sawyer...I was always hoping they get to spend time together....I know she is now at peace in Heaven....thank you for your kind words my wonderful sweet friend....love you much....Linda. xxoo
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