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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Dandelions In Heaven"

a collection of posts honoring a friend

  81 total reviews 
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a wonderful tribute to a great talent. although she was before my time here on FS, I have read some of her work and she was quite simply a poet. you have honored her, Linda............................meeshu


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Hi Gary, thank you so much for a wonderful review my sweet friend...Brooke was a teacher for FanStory...and anyone who needed help...she was there...even if you didn't take her class...that would be me...and I loved reading her writing...they made me smile....thank you...Love Linda xxoo
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A very well-written tribute to a wonderful poet and friend that manyou here on FanStory will miss even after five years of silence those who knows her in her prime still honor her today.


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Hi Sandra, she truly was a wonderful friend and writer sweet girl...and will be sooooo missed...so many are leaving or passing away....sigh...thank you for a wonderful review...love you...Linda xxoo
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How true. She was helpful to all on the site. She wrote of her love of family and nature. She always wrote helpful review. She will be missed. Prayers are with her family and friends on-line and off.

Keep writing

Joan


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Hi Joan, she was a friend to everyone...you just had to ask her and she would help you...and I loved her reviews to me...sigh...I know she is at peace in Heaven now...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...Love you ...Linda xxoo

reply by dragonpoet on 23-Mar-2019
    You're most kindly welcome, Linda. She is probably in deep discussion with her favorite poets right now.

    Joan

reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    I bet she is Joan...I said with all the FanStory poets/writers that have passed and gone to Heaven...think of the amazing poems and stories they can write...sigh...xxoo love
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I arrived here on Fanstory in the last days of Brooke's time here She was clearly very much appreciated by those Fanstorians who were reviewed by her. This seems to be such a fitting free verse tribute.


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Hi Jim, I was blessed my sweet friend to have known her...she was a wonderful lady and teacher...and will be so missed...thank you so much for a wonderful review....love Linda xxoo
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Although I joined after Brooke, I see the love and admiration everyone had for her. She was also deep and insightful from what I've gleaned. I am sorry for the loss of your dear friend. It is hard, I know...

This comes back to you with prayers of love and comfort from our great God. How kind He was to lend her to you!
All my best,
Sal xo


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Hi Sally, I'm so sorry you never got to meet her...she was a wonderful friend and a wonderful teacher...I never took her class...but whenever I posted a poem she would come right behind me...and make corrections for me...she made me laugh...I kept waiting for her to show up in my pm...sigh...but I know she is now at peace in Heaven...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...and all my best to you as well...love you...Linda xxoo
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I'm so sorry for your loss Linda, and it seems for mine as well for I never got to experience the wonderful woman that she so obviously was. I will certainly be looking through her work.


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Hi Susan, so sorry for the late reply sweet girl...she was an amazing lady...helped everyone who wanted it...and was a wonderful teacher...I was always hoping she would show up on my pm one day...thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
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Hello Linda: Our old friends here at Fanstory are slowly going home one by one and they have all been taking away from this world because of some sort of disease or sickness. It seems as though no one dies from a normal death anymore.

I loved your tribute to Brooke, especially the title. In my opinion, the way your words are presented is perfect. It makes it so much easier to read without being all jammed up.

This is what Brooke would tell you if she was writing this review after she read your notes. "Linda, if you don't like the format this way do an "edit" and change it."

And she would be right. It probably will be several weeks before everyone gets their book entries submitted. I'm going to start mine tomorrow.

She loved dandelions and she was a special lady. One of a kind when it came to helping people learn how to become better writers.

Have a great Sunday, my friend. I'll talk to you later, good Lord willing...Bill


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Hi Bill, I am so heartbroken...I was always hoping and praying her name would pop up on my PM...but I knew she with Miranda and Sawyer....and that is where she would wanted to be...so she was safe...I miss her so much...

    I did try to edit it...and had to rewrite the whole thing...the lines where all over the place...and it only shows up like this on the classic site...the new site is perfect...

    she was never my teacher in a class...but she was on the site...I would post something....and she would come and tell me my mistakes...and how to fix them...I would just thank her and smile...

    we would go back and fourth about dandelions being a weed...I think she finally convinced me...they were a pretty flower as well...and my granddaughter loved them...

    your right Bill...so many people dying of diseases not normal to our bodies...sigh...

    thank you Bill for all your wonderful stars...and a wonderful review...I will watch for yours...

    you have a wonderful day...it's in the 40's here today...problem is...the wind chill is in the 30's...
    Love Linda xxoo

reply by Cedar on 16-Mar-2019
    Yes, she had a thing for dandelions. I used to tell her the same thing about them being weeds and I would spray them or mow them down every time I saw one. She used to say, "Aw Bill don't do that, they are so pretty. It's in the 40's here. I'll talk to you next week...Take care, my friend...Bill
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Hi, Linda. I had no idea Brooke had passed. when was this? And how did you find out? I must be living in a shell or something. I never pick up things like this until way after the fact.

Your dedication to Brooke is wonderful and I know she would appreciate it, Linda. Everything about your poetry and the picture is perfect. Bless you, my friend...and God bless Brooke. I remember her and Sawyer fondly. Bob


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Hi Bob, so sorry sweet guy for being so late...house problems...you just have to love them...and what it cost to fix them...sigh...I found out on the forum...but then through Robyn...it broke my heart Bob...I was always waiting for her to show up on my pm...the same as I do about Maureen...I know her and Michael were good friends...and they are now together in heaven....with a lot of amazing writers from FanStory...one day we will see each other...so was a wonderful friend and a wonderful teacher...and will be so missed...thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...love Linda xxoo
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Aww, you brought Brooke back to us for a few moments in this poem. The memories of her reviews bring a smile to my face :) Nobody writes and reviews like our Brooke. She can never be replaced. Always a sweet spot in our hearts and memories.

Joy xx


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Joy, I was always hoping she would come to my pm ...sigh...she truly will never be forgotten....Brooke can never be replaced....she was an amazing friend and teacher....thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...love you....Linda xxoo
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This was a very touching tribute, Linda. I loved reading it and learning more about the person that she was and how she influenced everyone around her. Great job.


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Hi Chas, so sorry for the late reply my sweet friend....she was an amazing lady...she was a friend to everyone...and a teacher to others..Brooke will be so missed...thank you for a great review...love Linda xxoo
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