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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Dandelions In Heaven"

a collection of posts honoring a friend

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Linda,

I don't know why you are apologizing. It looks quite lovely here, too. Silly girl.

This is just beautiful, and even more so because it's clear every word is from the heart. I know the family will treasure it. THANK YOU!


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Robyn, thank you sweet one for a wonderful review....Brooke is now at peace in Heaven....and one day we will all be up there writing with all are FanStory Hall of Famers...LOL...love you sweet girl...Linda xxoo
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This is just beautiful Miss Linda.
Dandelions...perfect.
She had a way of finding the whimsy
and the magic in a weed.
I loved her 'Sawyer' poems.
Such a lovely, heartfelt tribute,
blessings...


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Judy, I miss her so much...I was always hoping she would show up on my pm...every time I would post a poem...she would come and correct my mistakes...she made me laugh....I loved her Sawyer poems as well...and her ten count poems...sigh...but I do know...she is at peace in Heaven...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...and all your wonderful stars....love you....Linda xxoo

reply by Irish Rain on 22-Mar-2019
    Ah, her ten count ones...I had forgotten those...I remember her holiday-Sawyer-type poems...she has gone home, and is at total peace now....Happy Spring Miss Linda!!!

reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    Happy Spring to you as well sweet girl...love you...xxoo
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Linda you are precious and so was Brooke our beloved Adewpearl... I love pearls and each poem of hers was a pearl . We all grew from reading and learning from her.
What a sadness falls for all of us
God bless


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Jenny, thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review....Brooke was amazing....she was a friend and teacher to everyone on FanStory...and yes she was a pearl...I miss her so much...like so many on here...I do know...she is now at peace in Heaven....thank you sweet girl....love you...Linda xxoo
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I too hoped she would return. Knowing this was coming still did not stop the blow to everyone. She was there for me and I remember the kind reviews. Your piece is a very well done tribute to a fine lady


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Barb, I was always waiting for her to show up in my pm....sigh...she was a wonderful friend and teacher....and loved by everyone....she was amazing....thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review....God Bless....I miss her....love you....Linda xxoo
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My heart just hurts today. This isn't how i wanted to wake up or see. I have a post I'm ready to post as well. I bought the wrong certificate so I'm waiting so I can promote it. She was an amazing person who inspired many. I think we were all hoping she'd return but I understand why she couldn't. Today is just a sad day. We all have one more angel looking out for us.


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Meghan, you are so right...we will have one more angel looking out for us....she was a wonderful friend, and teacher...and is so very much miss....I was Always hoping she would show up in my pm...sigh....thank you for a wonderful review sweet girl....love you...Linda xxoo
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Oh, Linda! I didn't know! Another of our favourites to join Heaven's Angels! She taught me so much, and when Sawyer was with his girlfriend, Chloe, we shared the joy of knowing my granddaughter was also called Chloe. I joined her classes, and... Oh, dear I just can't believe she's gone. To me, the number one spot and the second spot, in poetry, will always be Brooke's and Pam's.

She would smile at this tribute, my friend, the dandelions were her favourites. lol. Her life was Sawyer and Miranda, and I'm so pleased she spent these last few years near them. Well done, my dear friend. Love you lots. :) Sandra xxx


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    Hi Sandra, you are so right about her and Pam....I was always hoping she would show up in my pm...I remember Sawyers girlfriend Chloe....they were precious together...I miss her so much...I did the first day she left...she was a brilliant writer...and a wonderful friend....I do know she is at peace in Heaven....I read Robyn?s poem...the ones she put the pictures of Brooke and Sawyer in...I was so glad to see they had good times together....thank you my so sweet friend for a wonderful review...love you much girl....Linda xxoo
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What a lovely tribute, Linda!
I didn't know Brooke, but I have read three posts about her here and a poem about her on Facebook.
I have also read some of her posts. I love dandelions too.
She must have been a lovely lady.
Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Hi Maria, so sorry for the late reply...Brooke was truly one of a kind...she was an amazing lady...she was a great friend and teacher...and helped everyone...I miss her so much...like so many on FanStory...and I'm sure her family and friends...thank you for a wonderful review...and you are so very welcome...love you...Linda xxoo
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Angel-girl, you have nothing to apologize for -- this is a beautiful presentation, and a wonderful tribute.

Some minor nits to fix:

"I would wait (for) << omit this "for" -- you have a second one in the correct place.

"And she was never (too) far..." << not "to"

typo - "grandson"

"Along" - one word

Linda, I loved it! (And mystery of mysteries, your vase of dandelions comes with a sparrow on a windowsill -- the very bird that visited MY windowsill when I was so sad about losing Brooke...)

xx
Dawn


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Hi Dawn, Thank You so much sweet angel for helping me...just like Brooke would do...I had to write it two...the posting page messed up...so I was in a hurry...I have to be up at 7 am...and it's 2:35 am now...something at church...but I wanted to get this posted...I miss Brooke so much...sigh...thank you for your truly wonderful review my sweet friend...goodnight...love you lots...Linda xxoo

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 16-Mar-2019
    I love you lots too. Goodnight! xxoo
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Since Brooke loved dandelions so and wrote about them so often, Linda, that I haven't been able to look at those dainty, vibrant yellow blooms as weeds since.
Her love of poetry, the compassion and patience she displayed, without fail, for her fellow human beings, and the undaunted love she had for young Sawyer, her grandson, as well as her entire family and extended Fanstory family made her a truly very special person, indeed.
There will never be another quite like her.
She will be sorely missed.
RIP, dear Brooke. I'll see you soon!
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~Dean


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Hi Dean, OMG your picture has me crying...I miss her so much Dean...I did from the first day she left...I talked to her a couple times...thank you sweet guy for a truly wonderful and touching review...a stunning picture...and like you...she has me believing dandelions are pretty...sigh...tears Dean...and I truly hope you aren't going to see her soon...love to you...Linda xxoo

reply by Dean Kuch on 16-Mar-2019
    Brooke was one of the first to take me under her protective wing when I first arrived at Fanstory nearly six years ago, Linda.
    I will never forget her.
    ~Dean

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    I will never forget her either Dean...I go and visit Maureen and Gungalo (Pam) on their profile pages...I leave them little notes once in awhile...I know Pam is passed...but I pray that Maureen will pop up on my PM again...sigh...I miss Chey and Michael as well...see you later my sweet friend....and take care of yourself...love to you...Linda xxoo

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Comment by
Shirley McLain
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Beautiful tribute. She had a writing talent that she spread around without difficulty. She would help beginning writers any way she could. She will never be gone as long as she's remembered. Shirley

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 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Hi Shirley, thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...she helped us all...sigh...and will truly be missed...I am sorry for the late review...thank you...love you...Linda xxoo
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