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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "I Will Not Mourn"

a collection of posts honoring a friend

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The inevitable finally happened, as she left a while ago, sliding slowly down a slope. I remember so many of her story poems about Sawyer, so I find that picture particularly touching. She was a gentle mentor to us. I'll have to write one for her too. I miss her a lot. Thanks for posting.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Please do. I know the family will appreciate it. Hugs--
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This is a beautiful poem Robyn. I really like this one. I know Brooke would like it as well. I wish I knew how to get a ticket on this train and I might join the write.
Well done Robyn.
Nancy:)


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Oh, girl. It's easy. Check the instructions in my author notes. Please j us!
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A lovely tribute poem, Robyn...and a beautiful encouragement that, indeed, life goes on! :) ;) Thanx for sharing -- I just know her family will appreciate everyone's outpourings! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



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    Thanks, my friend!
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A very well-written tribute poem to adewpearl and her wonderful life she shared with you, I agree to keep her legacy alive and well we have to celebrate her life and not mourn her death.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Absolutely! Thanks, Sandra!
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Hi Robyn :)
This is beautiful. Perfect rhyme and meter.
Simple and to the point. It says it all.
Knowing Brooke was a joy....let's celebrate that.
Best wishes, Debra :)


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Absolutely! Thank you!
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-The image is very nice, Robyn,
thanks for sharing it, and the notes.
-I love the poem and the style of it.
-It comes from your heart.
-The idea of celebrating Brooke
is a good one.
-The last three lines are
excellent and leave us
with a fond memory of her.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Thank you so much -- I'm anxious to see what your new surprise it -- don't leave me hanging!!

reply by Pam (respa) on 18-Mar-2019
    You are very welcome, Robyn. I should after you made me think it was due NOW!!!
    ha,ha, ha!

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    no. just picking on ya

reply by Pam (respa) on 18-Mar-2019
    I know🙂
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Beautiful! You are right. The image is perfect. You get the full sense of love she had for her grandson. Showing him the wonders of the world. I agree with the lines of your poem. Celebrate! She beat us in the race to eternal victory!


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Exactly! Thank you!
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I absolute the photograph. Brooke and Sawyer are definitely engaged in looking into the ocean.

An excellent poem, Robyn in celebration of a woman who gave more than she knew.

I'm still working on mine, but it's coming. :)

Gloria


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    I know it will be amazing!!! I can't wait. Thank you!
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This is such a nicely composed poem, Robyn, for your friend and fellow poet, Brooke. I didn't know her, but it seemed she helped quite a few poets to perfect their craft. Your poem is paced well with good rhyme and theme. Marilyn


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Well, thanks again. Hopefully, I?ll catch up on my reviewing soon and repay your kindness. Ha!! Starting to wonder as I drown in messages these days. Ack!!
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a very fine tribute to a very big talent, robyn. she was before my time on FS, but I have read some of her work. she was a poet, that's my highest praise....................meeshu


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    I agree. Thank you, Gary.
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