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a collection of posts honoring a friend

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Just beautiful Miss Robyn.
I know her family, and all that knew
her feel the same.
She gave us whimsy, wonder and Sawyer.
And so very much more.
This is a lovely memorial,
Blessings...


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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Oh - I'm so glad you think so. That makes me very happy. YAY!
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This is a sixer, Robyn. But I'm all out.

That picture is perfect. Your message is superb. You touch my heart. You honor that wonderful woman and her accomplishments. She enjoyed the little details of the world around her. I've never met anyone quite like her. She's inspiring. She's a breath of fresh air.

I feel frozen in time. I'm trying to form ideas for a poem of my own, but it's hard for me. I write poetry to help other people grieve. It should be so easy to listen to my own advice.

Ahhhhh, I'm trying.

Joy xx


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    I don't know why you think it should be easy. It's only been a day. Give yourself some slack, please. I mean, Brooke meant a great deal to you. And no one is pushing you to come up with something right away, are they? Lord willing, we've got nothing but time.
    Take a deep breath and relax. Then, just be nice to yourself.
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Beautifully done, Miss Robyn. I did not have the honor of knowing her, but she obviously touched so many. An untimely death from illness is always hard to grapple with. To know the Lord and His care is how I make sense of these things.

The parting words of Sydney Carton of the The Tale Of Two Cities..."it is a far, far better rest that I go to than I have ever known." She is wonderfully cared for, you can rest in that. I am glad you have such sweet and sustaining memories of her.
All my best,
Sally


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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Absolutely right, Sally. That's what sustains me. Thank you!!
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Amen!!! I know Brook will want us to be happy and remember her for her fantastic poetry and celebrate the life she lived. I know I am a much better writer and person because she entered my life.


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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Amen! Thank you for getting it. I was scared people might think I was being flippant. Whew. thanks!
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Everyone acts as per his or her wisdom, but truth remains the same, love is unconditional and everyone does not understand the truth in the same order; you act right and you should; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Thank you!
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Wishing I had the sixth star this wonderful work truly deserves, as being so very well written, packaged, and delivered in all ways! I have no suggestions to improve upon this fine work and thank this author for a wonderful gesture of gratitude! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance


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    Thank you, Vance. You are very kind!
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A wonderful way to remember her with poetry and continuing on with life, jubilantly and treasuring her memory. Thanks for sharing, Robyn. In Heaven, you'll have to introduce me to her.


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    hahahaha! Let me work on getting myself there first... ( Thanks for having faith in me..) hahahahaha!
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I remember her well Robyn. Although I joined in late 2013, I remember her lovely manner, always kind never critical, along with with two other ladies, of high breeding, Gungalo (Pam) and Maureen (Mo's pen) she stood high among even them, well done, a beautiful tribute, well dine, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



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    Yay! Thank you, dear!

reply by royowen on 16-Mar-2019
    Welcome Robyn,
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Oh, Robyn, this is such a beautiful tribute to Brooke. What else can I say? I love your attitude about the memories and celebration. Death is a part of everyone's life. I am once again reminded to live each moment as it comes because that is our life - not tomorrow. Not yesterday but right now.
Thank you for sharing,

All the best,

Jan Anderegg
(Author of the 'Julu' series)

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 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Thank you, Jan. So true, so true!
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