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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "In the Presence of Sunshine"

a collection of posts honoring a friend

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Yes, I've read so many tributes and feel that anything I'm likely to write, would pale in the light of the many she has received, I have little to add except she was always kind and gentle with me, and she was here in my early days of late 2013. Well done Judy, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. Much appreciated. I'm sure you could contribute something beautiful for Brooke. judi

reply by royowen on 20-Mar-2019
    Bless you Judy

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    You could write a lovely tribute to Brooke. judi

reply by royowen on 20-Mar-2019
    I think I've done one already Judy, I haven't posted yet,

reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    I'm glad you did. judi

reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    You're very welcome. judi
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Hello Poet

I enjoyed reading your tribute for Brooke. Your heart-felt words resonate with me, and I am sure so many others too.

I particularly loved the following. phrasing. I think it sums up Brooke so beautifully.

Across golden fields
you spread eternal sunshine
shimmering in verse

-Ray


 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. Her poems were always sunny and upbeat. judi
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This was a very nice tribute to Brooke. She always reciprocated a review no matter how long it had been since you last posted.


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Hi, Bill, and thanks so much for your review and comments. I hope there will be a book with her lovely poems in it. Maybe Miranda can see that it happens. judi
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A wonderful way to remember a friend. I have not read any of her work and that is my loss. She evidently was quite talented and I am sure her many friends will keep her memory alive.


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    She wasn't active on the site for several years because of her illness, but her poems can still be seen on FS. (adewpearl) Thanks for your review and comments. I appreciate your input. judi
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It's obvious that you knew her well. Unlike Michael, I never came across her work..I checked her portfolio and saw that she posted last in spring 2015 long before I came member of the site..

I'm sure Miranda will find solance in reading her mother's work and when Sawyer is bigger he might become also "addicted" to pen and paper.

Despite we only communicate via internet ,as time goes by, one start "feeling" a connection with other fellow members.

Have a nice week Judi and if you don't mind please give a hug to Smokey and Heather from me . (biggrin)


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. It must have been three or four years ago when Brooke became ill. You can still see her work on the site. She was a wonderful writer, always uplifting. Thanks for mentioning Smokey and Heather. Both kitties are doing fine and are probably planning their next exploit. judi
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Hi Judi, this is such a wonderful tribute to Brooke's life and to her work.She's left a legacy for us all here on Fanstory. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. All the best. Ulla:)))


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. Brooke certainly showed us how to write poetry. judi
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Cheers, Judi;
>You leave my heart and soul with this wonderfully written epitaph of a woman who brightened our lives and where she took our hearts but when she gave it back it was much better than when our hearts were taken.
> Beautiful words and thanks for sharing the poet start is Miranda and Sawyer will I remember is maybe the up-and-coming writers we shall soon witness, hopefully as a legacy.
>Thank you for sharing and caring and take care and have a good one..
Alx


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. Her poems were always so upbeat. I always felt uplifted after I read one. judi

reply by krys123 on 19-Mar-2019
    You're welcome Judi.
    Alx
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Hi Judi,

Oh so many wonderful memories of our Brooke :) She cann never be replaced. You are so right. She wrote such wonderful poems and made it look so easy. Yet I know she had a huge amount of talent and skill. She wrote so much and consistently had high quality poems.

I've enjoyed reading your post and all the tributes to Brooke. Great memories of her.

Joy xx


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. That's the secret, isn't it. Making writing a poem look easy. judi
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Ladylike is a perfect description for her. She was so kind and gracious to all, always. In the whole history of Fanstory, there was none so beloved as her...deservedly. Very nice contribution to this book of tributes. I enjoyed your reference to dandelions...so Brooke! She likely loves this phrasing as much as I do: eternal sunshine
shimmering in verse


Yes!

Warmly, rd


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Thank you so much for the lovely words. Brooke was an inspiration to us all. Her poetry was always uplifting. judi

reply by rama devi on 17-Mar-2019
    :-)))
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I have read every poenm she has written since i joined this site .she has reviewed all my poems too.
you are right when you say that her poems are magical, whimsical and beautifullly composed...


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. Her poems can still be read on the site, I believe. Her poems were indeed magical. judi
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