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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Adieu Adewpearl"

a collection of posts honoring a friend

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Hello zanya,

I enjoyed reading your tribute to Brooke today :) I'm not normally a fan of the haibun and skip them, but here I can see that the poetry form has its merits. I enjoyed you sharing your memory of Brooke followed by a little haiku to sum it all up.

There is nobody like Brooke and there never will be again. She was unique. She will be missed for a long, long time.

Joy xx


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Yes so sad to r ead of Brooke's passing - thanks for those inspiring comments for this little memory zanya
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her love of dandelions gave her a unique status in this site. not only dandelions ,she could write about anything from nature and include a human interest.
i have been missing her poems ...


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Yes indeed -such sad news zanya
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Her legacy lives on for ever she has made a friend of so many of us along the way her memories will be for ever and a day. So nice of you to honor her in this way. She will be missed!


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Yes her memory will live on -thanks for those interesting comments zanya
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Hi Zanya,

What a beautiful tribute to your dear friend and mentor. I am sorry to say I did not know her as I have just recently returned to the site after an absence of 10+ years.

Two offerings for your consideration:

"dandelions yellow
florets sway sadly in breeze.
Brooke bids adieu"

Did you mean to cap the first word and place a period at the end?

Thanks so much for sharing.

Jan


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Thanks for sharing and those helpful suggestions zanya
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Well said... Your presentation here as a tribute to Brooke is beautiful... She will be missed by a lot of fanstorians, she was a great teacher and an inspirational writer... And she helped a lot of people improve in there craft and was always so helpful.
Judy


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Yes indeed Brooke will be sadly missed zanya
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