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Who stares back at you?

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Earl Corp
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This is the first of these entries I have read and it's a winner to me. It hits all my criteria for a poem. It rhymes. it makes sense, it's spiritual. and it touches me emotionally. Very nice job.


 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
    Thank you so much Earl Corp! That's very encouraging to hear that you think it's a winner! I tried to keep it simple but to the point. Appreciate you taking the time to let me know.
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That's very true. But I can testify that I went looking for God when I was a whelp at age 17, but the church where I attended...not a sign. It wasn't until reached the age of 41, that He made Himself known, it reminded me, He chooses us, we don't choose Him. But we must answer that call. Well done Kathleen, a marvellous entry in this rhyming poetry contest, good luck, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Thanks so much Roy for the personal comments in the review. It can happen at any age, you're right. I'm glad you thought this entry was a good one as I wasn't sure how the Christian community would take this poem as the picture is a bit evil looking. But that was the point. I feel that some that need to be reached won't necessarily go for the obvious wholesome looking picture but maybe something more dark yet find a Godly message within.

reply by royowen on 19-Mar-2019
    Well done
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Donka Kristeva
 
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A very needed topic to tackle and you've done it with clarity, courage and conviction. A fierce battle goes on in our souls, it is there for us to fight! It reminded me of the parable of the ten virgins-- five with lamps filled with oil and five without oil... The art work startles, a great choice.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Thanks so much for your review Donka! I was hoping not to offend my fellow Christians on this site because most of my writings are of a spiritual nature but not all things are a bed of roses. Once in a while, I may expose the dark side not to glorify it, but to draw the lost to it and hopefully sew a seed to win souls for Christ.
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I am so glad the fight is over and the victory won for you and for me. When I sin, I say, "that was the old you, don't go back there!" There really isn't anything to go back for. We are made new in Christ the very moment we believed. Thank Him forever!
All my best,
Sal xoxo


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Thank you Sally, I'm glad we're both on His side! I appreciate your comments in this review. Blessings to you!
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A very well-written poem about our reflections i n the mirror that sometimes show us more than we bargain for. The evil spirit can easily convince us he is the only way, but luckily we know the real answer that we can only be saved by the son of God, Jesus Christ.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    I couldn't agree with you more! There is only one answer to get away from evil forces and that's through Jesus Christ!
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This was a good write, Kathleen Washnis. That would be disturbing to see that in the mirror. I like the way you transitioned to the end. Good job and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Thank you for your review of my poem 24chas; I'm glad you liked how I transitioned to the good side in the end.
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The battle is over, you see on mirror, the demon from inside fought but at last left, now only God resides there; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Thank you for your review of my poem Alcreator!
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I choose the good and God...
7 Submit yourselves therefore to God. Resist the devil, and he will flee from you.
8 Draw near to God, and he will draw near to you. Cleanse your hands, you sinners, and purify your hearts, you double-minded. - James 4:7-8If we actively submit to God and resist the evil one the devil will flee.
God bless


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Thanks for your insightful review. We all have our own individual journey so we need to pray for those who may even think they are good but have not committed themselves to the Lord.
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It is so very true that there is a battle for our souls. We all do have to make a choice to resist the evil and accept the love that comes form God.
Patricia
BTW I made my choice for God 60 years ago.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Thank you so much for your six star review and I'm glad you chose the right side along time ago!
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I think it is easy to fall for evil thoughts when we are upset or angry and it is much harder to be forgiving, so your journey is a tough one, a well rhymed poem with poignant sentiments, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Thank you very much for your review of my poem Dolly!
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