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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


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a collection of posts honoring a friend

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Maria Jose Garcia
 
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I love your poem and the quote and even though I never met Brooke, I have read a lot about her these past few days and she seems lovely.
Just one thing: in this sentence: the carriage pull in haste, didn't you mean pulls?
Thanks for writing this tribute.

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 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Hello Maria,
    Thank you for the wonderful comments. I glad you liked the poem tribute. The word "pull" is connect to the noun "steeds,"
    thus it must be plural, as in "steeds pull." I appreciate your encouraging words very much.
    Robert

reply by Maria Jose Garcia on 17-Mar-2019
    Ok, I understand now. I hadn't paid attention to the whole sentence. I thought carriage was the subject. Thanks for explaining.
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