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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Adewpearl Brooke"

a collection of posts honoring a friend

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It's nice to see another tribute to Brooke, even after all this time. Upon my return to Fan Story, she has popped into my mind from time to time.

Oh, Sandra, I'm reading on and realize that Brooke has passed. 'now that you're well again' expresses what I would have said, but in a tender and poetic way. Your talent does her justice. Sigh . . . Best Wishes, Lou


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Thank you, Lou, for your kind words, I was in shock when I read the news on here. I had hoped one day she would be well enough to write another poem for us. But it was not to be. Thanks again, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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Hi Sandra, this is just beautiful...it makes you feel good that she is out of pain...but I sure miss her...I was truly hoping she would come back...an amazing poem sweet girl...she did love those dandelions (weeds)...we went back and forth on what they truly were...but I must say...I think she won in a way...they are pretty...LOL...she truly will never be forgotten...I love your beautiful tribute to Brooke my sweet friend...and the perfect picture...very nicely written...love you so bunches...Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Hi, Linda, it doesn't seem real, does it? First Michael, now Brooke. What's happening? Thank you so much for your kind words, dear friend, I'm so pleased you liked my poem for Brooke, she certainly did love her dandelions, lol. And I'm sending a huge hug for the 6 stars, and for being such a nice lady. Love you lots, dear, and I hope that arm isn't playing you up? :) Sandra xxxx

reply by l.raven on 18-Mar-2019
    Hi Sandra, no!!! it sure doesn't seem real...but I was so glad Robyn posted the pictures she did of her and Sawyer...I was always hoping they were able to do things together...she will be so missed my sweet friend...sigh...I'm still not over Gungalo (Pam)...and then Michael...but now they are all together in heaven...I would love to read the poetry they could right now...you are always so welcome sweet girl...so much love...and smiling back at you...Linda xxoo
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This is a fine tribute to a lady with whom I only just managed to come into contact, my synchronicity being right out of kilter as far as she was concerned. She became ill very shortly after I arrived but I really don't think I was the cause.

Should your first line pluralise 'four-leafed-clover' since you say 'their faces'? Apart from that I can see no problems with this piece.


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Thank you so much, Jim, for the lovely review and pointing out that error. I've corrected it now. No, I don't think you were the cause, lol, you're not that powerful!!! lol :)) Sandra xx
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I love the beauty simple and pure in this write Sandra. It's a great tribute and I feel like you really summed it up about who Brooke was and how she'll be remembered. Super write. Hope you are well and congrats on publishing. Is it in kindle yet? xoxo Kiwi / deborah


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Thank you,, Deborah. I'm so sad we have lost her, she was one of the best. Sandra xx
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This poem, Adewpearl Brooke, is a beautiful tribute that captures some of her themes in what is a solid tribute to the great lady.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Thank you, Bill. It was a sad day when we lost a great poet on this site. Sandra xxx
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I'm speechless! This poem is soooooo beautiful! I'm left to wonder if Brooke is your guardian angel and sat near to instruct you. WOW! What a tribute! She has to be smiling about this one.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    If only she was, I'd be the best poet on here! She was an amazing lady, and her poems were always the best. I think most people who knew this gentle soul will miss her. Thank you so much for the six stars, my friend. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
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This is just so lovely
Miss Sandra.
I know Brooke is delighted,
and as you said...well again also.
One of the sweetest tributes I've
ever read,
Blessings...


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Thank you. What a lovely review. I do so hope Brooke can look down and see how much everyone loved her. I can't imagine what dear Sawyer is feeling. Thanks, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

reply by Irish Rain on 18-Mar-2019
    I wondered about Sawyer too. God bless them all. You are most welcome!
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Beautiful poem for a much appreciated, beautiful soul. I will miss her apt, yet gentle critiques of my work, as well as her incomparable ability to place me in the middle of every poem she wrote. Thank you for not letting us forget.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    She was a true gentle soul, and yes, everyone who knew her will miss her. Thank you so much for reading my dedication to a great poet and friend. Sandra xxx
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Oh dear, there are going to be many of these tributes, and once more I am welling up.
This is beautiful, Sandra, full of wonderful sentiment and gorgeous imagery, easy to visualize.

Well done, my friend.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Thank you, Dawn. I just couldn't believe it when I heard she had passed over. At least she is now out of pain, and hopefully back to her writing. Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 18-Mar-2019
    True. Still... :(
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I think just the fact that she's not suffering or in any pain anymore and free to write and do what she loves again is enough to celebrate. It's hard losing a friend but you're right, we'll get to see her again one day


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    I'm sure her pen is inked and the words are flowing, she has a lot to catch up on. We'll all miss her and her wonderful talent. Thank you for reading my poem. Sandra xx
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