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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "I Will Miss You My Friend"

a collection of posts honoring a friend

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Louise Michelle
 
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Brooke's talent, expertise and graciousness touched so many people, which is why she is so loved and so missed.

Thank you for sharing your personal relationship with her, Bill. And I truly enjoyed reading your poem. In its simplicity, it speaks volumes and is so important for us all to remember when we're mourning. Regards, Lou


 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Thank you, Lou, for your very gracious review, I really appreciate it.

    She did touch a lot of people on and off this site. I think the first line of your review pretty well says it all Lou.

    Thanks again my friend and keep writing...Bill
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Such a touching tribute to Brooke, Bill. Makes me wish I'd known her, too. Sounded like a lovely and talented lady who was willing to share her joy of poetry with others. I'm very moved reading this.


 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
    Thank you for your warm and kind words my friend, I really appreciate it.

    Yes, she was very talented and also very well liked and respected here on Fanstory. She will be missed.

    Have a great day...Bill
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Nicely said Bill. Good to read and hear the various of the late dear lady. I am always happy reading the different ways she touched people. This is no exception.
Thank you Bill for posting for our reading.
My very best wishes
RGstar


 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
    Hello RG: Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it.

    Yes, Brooke touched a lot of people on this site and also in her personal life. She was cheerful and she was born to be a teacher. Then MS took all of that away. Enjoy life while you can, we never know what tomorrow may bring.

    Have a great day RG. Cheers...Bill
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Hello Cedar
No need for me to post my thoughts about Brooke, 'cause I would say the same as you did,
especially, knowing ( as you said about Brooke- I felt the same way- that she was a woman with grace and dignity, always willing to share her knowledge with anyone without hesitation.
Gert


 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
    Thank you, Gert, for your wonderful review, I really appreciate it. She was a fine lady, just as you are.

    Take care of yourself Gert and have a blessed day...Bill

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reply by Gert sherwood on 19-Mar-2019
    You are so Welcome Bill
    Gert
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Another lovely tribute to Brooke -- she certainly touched many lives and this is such a touching and personal addition to her memory book -- beautiful, Bill! :) ;)
Yvette :)


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
    Thank you so much Yvette for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great day...Bill
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Bill: Brooke loved her dandelions. They gave her great joy and brought
us sunshine. Her counting poems were so funny with worms that smiled.
I took her children's poetry class. She told me to listen to RG STAR to hear
the dadum dadum beat. Brooke loved us all as she blew the dandelion
seeds upon us all. flylikeaneagle - nancy


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
    Thank you, Nancy, for your excellent review, I appreciate it.

    Yes, you're certainly right about that. Personally, I don't think we will ever see another poet like her. Take care...Bill
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We will meet her again in the glories of heaven and spend hours, weeks and months talking with her. May she have the sweet rest she so well deserves.
Patricia


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
    Hello Patricia. Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Yes, I also believe that we will see her again. Have a nice day...Bill
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Hi Bill, still brings tears when I think about her...you are a sweetheart...what a wonderful tribute to a lovely lady sweet guy...she was truly a brilliant writer...and funny...she would come and correct my mistakes...and we would laugh...she would correct them...I talked to her on the phone just a few times after she had the stroke...she said she remembered me...but it broke my heart...she loved everyone Bill...and everyone loved her....I loved her ten count poems...I loved all her poems...I so miss her...did the day she left...and yes she loved her dandelions...and my granddaughter loved them to...she said Grace had taste...LOL...but she won...I started seeing them as pretty...

and I was enjoying watching Sawyer grow up...playing with ants on the sidewalk...he loved his critters...I'm so glad Robyn posted the pictures she did...I got to see that they did have some time together...and what a cute little guy Sawyer has grown up to be...

I'm so glad you let everyone know things about Brooke they didn't know...thank you...very well written you...love Linda xxoo she is now at peace in heaven...


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
    Hello Linda: Thank you, as always, for your exceptional review and kind words, I really appreciate it.

    Brooke was the first writer that I really connected with back when we first joined. It was so much fun back then. Nothing like it is now.

    How's your health doing? Have you gotten any better?

    Spring is coming. it's supposed to be in the 60's and 70's by the weekend. That will make us all feel better.

    Take care of yourself, my good friend...Bill

reply by l.raven on 19-Mar-2019
    Hey you, Pili was the first one to come to me...and the Brooks and Gungalo...there were others...but most have passed or left the site...sigh...I am doing better...I get rid of one thing...and I guess that gives another the ok to jump right in there...LOL...it's a good day today....could be a little more on the warm side...but I'm not complaining...LOL...we will all meet some day...now!!! you take care as well...see you soon...much love xxoo
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Wonderful words here, Bill. Such a tender set of remembrances. I too remember her fondly, though I joined the site much later. Any lady that can make you mow around the dandelions is truly unique! Those few words sum her up to perfection.


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
    Hello Tony: Thanks for your excellent review, I really appreciate it.

    Yes, she was a lady of perfection in so many ways. I don't think we will ever see another one like her at Fanstory.

    Have a great day, my friend...Bill
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This is a very loving and honest tribute. I did not know Brooke, except through the loving and caring poetry dedicated to her. She knows how you all feel and is smiling down from our Father's kingdom, where she will be Poet Laureate.


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
    Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Brooke truly was a special Lady.

    Take care, my friend...Bill

reply by Miss Sherry on 19-Mar-2019
    Blessings to you, Bill.
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