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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "You Go, Girl!"

a collection of posts honoring a friend

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Lou,

hahahaha What fun! There's a lady at our church who cooks great - I mean great! (I mean, better than most church cooks, even.) One day, my son said, when she dies, if there's a buffet in heaven, she'll be in charge of it. *smile*

That's kind of the way we feel about Brooke, right? haha! Thanks so much for the smile!!!



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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    I'm so glad you enjoyed this, Robyn. I had a heavy heart when I wrote it. Even when I'm expressing grief, it comes out in a light hearted way. We all loved her.
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Ah Louise, this is so sweet and so uniquely different from the others I've read. Very much your style and if Brooke is reading this she will be smiling. A lovely addition to the book. Warm regards Dorothy x


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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Thank you, Dorothy. I had a heavy heart when I wrote this. Even when I'm expressing grief, it comes out in a light hearted way. We all loved her.
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his is a beautiful tribute to Brooke, she is now coaching the angel in heaven, what a lovely thought, a wonderful thoughtful poem, best wishes, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



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    Thank you, Dolly. We all loved her.
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Beautiful and inspiring. A poet "teaching in heaven"....Fl..owing rhyme, and
good pace, this poem is a delightful read.


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



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    Thank you. We all loved her.
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Aw, Lou, that was lovely. I could imagine Brooke laughing at this one, standing teaching the angels, she could do it, too! You are so right in that she would never trash students writing, but would only offer encouragement. Well done, my friend, this was so lovely. :) Sandra xx


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    Thank you, Sandra. Even when I'm expressing grief, it comes out in a light hearted way. We all loved her.
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I think Lou that this is my favorite of these tributes to Brooke. Adewpearl....ah she is where the pearly gates are....she can be a glisten of dew ...I know angels will listen as she glistens
Well penned
God bless


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    Thank you, Jenny. We all loved her.
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This was a great tribute, Louise Michelle. I loved how it captured her spirit and her inner being. You must have known her well. Love the artwork, too. Good job.

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    Thank you, Chas. We all loved her.
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So sweet. I never knew Brooke, but from all I've read about her this weekend here on FS, she sounds exceptional for all the right reasons. This is a lovely tribute to an obviously lovely woman. xo

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 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019



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    Thank you, Rachelle. We all loved her.

reply by Rachelle Allen on 18-Mar-2019
    It certainly seems like it!
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