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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Adieu, Dear Brooke"

a collection of posts honoring a friend

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Wow -- I feel like a know at least a little bit more about the wonderful lady that everyone seemed to know so well -- your write here and, especially your author notes were very insightful, Pam -- thank you for sharing! :) :) Yvette


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Thanks for the review, Yvette. I am glad you liked my tribute, poem, and notes, and feel like you know a little bit about Brooke. That means a lot. She was one of a kind.
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You brought tears to my eyes, Pam. I just dropped in for a moment and saw your tribute to Brooke. It is lovely. I like they way you incorporated her work in the piece.

I will miss her. Brooke was a force on the site. When I started on FS I think she reviewed every poem and story posted, no matter the subject. She was amazing, and I truly valued her critiques and advice, as well as taking a few of her classes.

Well done.


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Debi. I appreciate your comments very much. I am glad you liked my tribute and the inclusion of her work. She was such a positive and kind person, and very talented, too.
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Another wonderful tribute to a friend to all who knew her on FanStory, I regret that I did not, however, I am so impressed at the coming together of people to celebrate her life. I know I wouldn't be missed to anywhere near this extent, which speaks volumes about the woman she was.

Your opening line.... "Goodness shines today through twilight's shadows." is wonderful and the highlight of the whole piece for me. It states plainly and sadly
that the dark (twilight) is coming but her goodness shines bright. Wonderful.

Bill (WildWithWords)



 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Thanks for the review, Bill. I am glad you liked my tribute and appreciate the coming together of those who knew her. She was a one of a kind person. I appreciate you sharing your favorite line and why you liked it.
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What a beautiful tribute to Brooke you have provided here. She was indeed an exceptional poet and a great friend to many on FanStory.
I joined in 2010 and learned so much from her. I was sad when she had to leave this site.
Thank you for sharing this very touching piece.
Connie


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Connie. I am glad you liked my tribute. She was an exceptional poet and wonderful friend. Thanks for sharing about her and my poem.
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This is a lovely contribution to the book, Pam, and I'm sure Brooke's family deeply appreciates it.

The image is stunning, your words heart felt and written well. We all loved her. Regards, Lou


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Thanks for the review, Lou. I am glad you liked my tribute, and I appreciate your comments about it-the image and heartfelt words. Yes, she was well loved.
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This was a very sweet poem Pam. Loved the imagery that you put in the very beginning of this piece where you talked about" Goodness shining through twilights shadows." Glad that you were able to eulogize your friend through this fantastic piece of poetry. Well done.


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
    Thanks for the review, Justin. I am glad you liked the poem and highlighted the imagery you liked in the beginning. It is appreciated.

reply by Justin Chopin on 28-Mar-2019
    You're welcome.

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
    Thanks.

reply by Justin Chopin on 29-Mar-2019
    You're very welcome Pam.
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Hi Pam, this is a wonderful tribute to Brooke. I like how you include one of her poems, a Whitney. And then you enclose one of your own. They are both lovely poems and a joy to read. Yes, Brooke's father was a clever man to let nature take its course. Warm regards. Ulla:)))


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Ulla. I am glad you liked this tribute and the inclusion of the Whitney poems. I appreciate your comment about her father, too.
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Hi Pam, A delightful tribute to Brooke and I can see the love for her in so many posts. Brooke was not active when I joined so never got to know her but she obviously had a huge impact on many. You do her justice in this lovely post. Cheers Christine


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Christine. I am glad you liked this tribute and are learning about Brooke through the many that have been posted. It is appreciated.
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This is a lovely tribute to Brooke, Pam :) I'm glad to see you quote Robyn and share Brooke's Whitney poem. Your own Whitney poem gives it all a lovely finishing touch. We all bond throuh our poetry, and we keep Brooke's poetry alive together.

I'm under the weather and you lifted my spirits substantially just now. Thanks for that.

Joy xx


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Joy. I am so glad you stopped by, as I knew you would like the Whitney's. It was because of you that I knew about them in her portfolio and had actually copied two quite a while ago. It was nice to have her notes about the dandelions, too.

    I am glad you appreciated the use of Robyn's quote. Her poem touched me, too, as did so many. We do all bond through poetry. I am glad that your spirits were lifted; that is what we do, too, try to look out for anyone a bit under the weather, etc.
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Thank you Pam for including an iconic Adewpearl Brooke poem...where breezes do the seeding..I hope she is where breezes blow her beautiful dandelions and buttercups. She was child like in her elevation of little things others bypass
Thank you and God bless for this


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Thanks for the review, Jenny. I appreciate your comments and am glad you liked the inclusion of Brooke's poem. I think she is where there are "beautiful dandelions and buttercups."
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