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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Pearls of Wisdom"

a collection of posts honoring a friend

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Lance Loria
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Beautiful complimentary artwork with the poem. I really enjoyed the rhyme. So many poems are void of rhymes. I'm just old fashioned I guess. LOL You write beautifully and I'll come back for more.


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much.
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I love this poem and tribute to Brooke, especially the last line. Your choice of artwork is beautifully matched to your words. God bless. Jen.


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much.
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SIX STARS 6******BEAUTIFUL dedication and testimonial to Brooke. So sad that a life was extinguished so early. Your photo is a lovely representation of how she probably looked as the Number 1 poet for years so loved and respected. LOVELY! Read mine, also. lolol liberty justice


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you once again for these lovely stars .I am sorry my reply was delayed.

reply by Liberty Justice on 06-Apr-2019
    READ mine also.
    lolol liberty justice
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She was much help to someone like me who knew very little about poetry. During my posting of much Historical fiction she would edit with kindness and suggestions. Thank you for remembering her.


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much.
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This poem in sonnet format tells us of her love of life and poetry. She was so talented and giving of her knowledge and encouragement.

Keep writing

dragonpoet


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much.

reply by dragonpoet on 01-Apr-2019
    You are so very welcome, Sanku.

    Dp
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What a lovely tribute to an apparently amazing person and excellent poet who I'm so sorry I came on the site too late to know. You mentioned something I've heard others note in tributes to her as well: that every creature, from the smallest to the largest, was afforded equal respect and admiration in her poetry. I wish I'd had the chance to meet her. You describe her with such beautiful love and reverence.


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much. her poems are available here to read .They are a real pleasure to read.

reply by Michele Harber on 01-Apr-2019
    You're welcome, and I'll definitely check them out. Thank you.
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Yes, Brooke... I did not know her as well as you. But for a number of years she was kind, and took the time to make to make suggestions to help me make my meager entries a little better. For that, I will always remember her. This is another very, very nice tribute to a wonderful lady. I wish you well.


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much.

reply by victor 66 on 01-Apr-2019
    You are most welcome.
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Hello Sanku
Smiles to you with your rhyming poem of once having Brooke on fanstory and you are so right she definitely had pearl of widsom and how she shared them with us to aid all of us of how and what we should say in a poem
Gert


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much

reply by Gert sherwood on 01-Apr-2019
    You are welcome Sanku
    Gert
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Nice tribute, Santha. I liked this stanza in particular:

"Dandelions, daffodils, shadows and sand grain,
Her muse never failed in measure or in rhyme.
Sawyer's wonder about falling stars and rain,
Fireflies and rising bubbles made her life sublime."

Suggestion: Your text is washed out being in white on a blue background. Something darker would be very nice. Bless you. Bob


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much, Bob.Thanks for the suggestion .I will be more careful. I should have thought of that.

reply by Mastery on 01-Apr-2019
    The white is still washing out a vit. I would go with a darker color like brown or black for your text, Sanku. Bob
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I don't know this poet, but I can see her through your poem. Very good poem and tribute to someone you admired. The hereafter is indicated by sitting by His side. Comment made on 3-23,19 by called2rite


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much
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