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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Pearls of Wisdom"

a collection of posts honoring a friend

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A really touching poetic tribute to your friend Brooke, complemented glorious by your picture choice. Word choice is excellent and the theme consistent with her life and writing style. The choice of rhyming sonnet was very fitting.

Thank you for teaching me more about a woman I didn't know, but who clearly was immensely respected here.

Bill (WildWithWords)


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much.
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24chas
 
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This was a beautiful tribute to Brooke, Sanku. She was definitely well though of here on the site and everywhere else she went as well, I'm sure. Nice job.


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



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Sanku: what a sweet honor to Brooke. She loved to write and
spent the time helping us. Seemed like Brooke was always on
the site reading our posts. I took her children's poetry class.
You captured her poems and style. Great rhymes and remembrance.
flylikeaneagle


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



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Sanku,
The flow was very nice. The theme was good. The arrangement is fine, smoothly readable and understandable. Thoughts are expressed and described well. The artwork complemented your poem.

It is perfectly written and completely error free.

The words you chose worked well.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



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Hello Sanku,
Nice piece of poetry beautifully reminding of Brooke ( adewpearl ).
Lucid and perfectly matching the theme phraseology .
Smooth, spontaneous, and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
This line is particularly noteworthy:
"Pearls of wisdom, brilliant as morning dew..."
Excellent Tribute to Brooke!


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
    Thank you once again for this honour.

reply by RPSaxena on 02-Apr-2019
    Sanku, Most Welcome!
    ~ RP
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A beautiful tribute to a beautiful lady and your pearls are shining through in honour of Brooke, this is presented with much caring here, best wishes, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



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A Beautfully fully written ode to a very popular and much loved Brooke Baldwin, "Adewpearl". You've scribed a wonderful work dedicated to Brooke's memory, I don't thin I've encountered a more highly thought of person than Brooke. You're poem in dominantly Heptametric stanzas is articulate, smooth, well rhymed in abab with couplet, excellent job, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



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reply by royowen on 01-Apr-2019
    Most welcome
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In my opinion, a beautiful tribute to a classic artist, beautifully written in emotional expression and rhyming rhythm, which she would love. I loved Brooke's poems from my first day with FanStory and still find it impossible to believe she is gone, both she and Michael Cahill - such losses, both...


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



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reply by evesayshi on 01-Apr-2019
    You are very welcome, Sanku...Eve
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Hi Sanku, this is a beautiful poem and a beautiful tribute the memory of Brooke, Adewepearl. The artwork is outstanding and so appropriate to your love words. Thanks for sharing this with us all. Ulla:)))


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



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A wonderful tribute to Brooke. I loved her poems and learned so much from her.

Your comment of "A joyful spirit", perfectly describes the spirit of our teacher and friend.

Well done.

Blessings
Janet


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



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