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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


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She was a grand lady and always helpful and encouraging. I learned so much from her over the years.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful tribute to Brooke.

Well done.
blessings
Janet


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Thanks Janet, for your excellent review, and moot comments,, Roy
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Sorry to hear about your dear friend, Brooke. This is a beautiful tribute I'm sure she is reading in heaven right now. It's sad to see our loved ones leave, and the end of such talent. But one thing we can remember, and that's the memories left behind that will always shine in our hearts.

You're a good friend and an inspiring writer that we are grateful for.
Thank you for sharing. May your friends memory always stay bright.

Always your fan,
Shana :)


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Bless you Shana, you are a light in the darkness my friend, thank you, blessings, Roy
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This is beautiful. I knew you'd write a lovely tribute. Brooke left a wonderful legacy, not only in her poetry, but in her kindness. She touched so many of us here on FS. "Earth's time can't tarnish gold." That certainly describes Brooke. She was the real thing. "Yes dust produces pearls." How appropriate. In your first stanza, fourth line, I think you need the plural verb, "forever fill." An excellent addition to the book honoring this amazing woman. judi


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Thanks Judi, , for your fantastic review, and great comments,, Roy

reply by judiverse on 24-Mar-2019
    You're very welcome. A lovely tribute. judi

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    Well done

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    Well done
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This is a beautiful ode to Brooke Brother. When all is said and done and we breathe our last, nothing is going to stand except that which is silver and gold refined in the fire of God's holiness. From everything I've heard about her, she was a wonderful woman and a great writer. You've done a beautiful job with this poem in memory of her. I'm sure that this made her smile from above. Great job and well done!


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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Thanks Jeffrey, , for your fantastic review, and great comments,, Roy
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Your tribute to Brooke is very beautiful. I know she is smiling down as she reads. Yes, she was a true lady in more than one way. I miss her friendship. Thank you for sharing.


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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Thanks Barbara, for your fantastic review, and great comments,, Roy
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Hi Roy, this is a lovely poem you've written in memory of a writer and poet I've come to learn was so very talented. I'd only been on the site five months when I realised that a very popular poet had fallen ill. It turned out to be Brooke. Yeah, I regret that I missed her and her writing at the time. I liked your poem, and it is a great tribute to her. All best. Ulla:))


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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Thanks Ulla, for your fantastic review, and great comments,, Roy
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The rating goes as much to the quality of the lady as it does to the poem. I must confess I hadn't heard of her death. I knew she was unwell. When did she die, Roy.
I loved your tribute, Roy and I'm sure Adewpearl would have given you a six as well.


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Thanks Bob, for your wonderful review, and fantastic comments,, very recently passing, not sure exactly Roy
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A really wonderful tribute to another Fan-Storian. It is sad to see some die. I'm sure her family will appreciate these poems. I hope they get to see them. Well done as always sir.


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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Thanks Rox, for your fabulous review, and solendid comments,, Roy
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Cheers, Roy;
> A very personal and heartfelt elegy type of writing for and of Brooke's life In both metaphorical and allegorically demonstrative.
>Of all this you describe what she as an angel of poets, has written, taught and aided all of us here at fan story. You and I both started in 2013 and recognize this poets expertise almost immediately. And she always had room for more fans are now or how she did it.
> She dedicated a part of her life for us and we are blessed with that.
> Take care and have a good one, Roy.
Alx


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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
    Thanks Alex, for your fantastic review, and great comments,, Roy

reply by krys123 on 25-Mar-2019
    You're quite welcome, Roy.
    alx
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That was lovely, Roy, your words are a true tribute to a kind, remarkable lady. Always ready to help, she taught me much in her classes. She never had a bad word for anyone as she reviewed our work, instead, she inspired and encouraged. This is a wonderful addition to the book that will be presented to Miranda. I'm sure she will be overcome with emotion. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx


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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    Thanks dear Sandra, for your empathetic review, and uplifting comments,, Roy
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