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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


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a collection of posts honoring a friend

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So many sincere thanks to this wonderful author for delivering such a beautiful message of appreciation and honor for the many gifts of this lovely author we shall all miss deeply. MY thanks to this author for a wonderful testimonial! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance


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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    Thanks dear Vance, for your empathetic review, and uplifting comments,, Roy
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A lovely tribute to Brooke and her work here on FanStory.
She has been a well loved friend and teacher here for years. I'm sure she will be well rewarded for the loving woman she was. Good Job. Nancy:)


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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    Thanks Nancy, for your empathetic review, and uplifting comments,, Roy
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Very nicely written tribute to Brooke. I love how you've concluded with some good home spun wisdom, because it is indeed true that a little dust irritant produces pearls.

Fine metre and rhyme and excellent addition to the tribute book. :)

Gloria


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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    Thanks Gloria, for your empathetic review, and uplifting comments,, Roy
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What a lovely poem--well-deserving of a 6! This moving tribute to a great
poet and lady makes effective use of specific details, and the rhyme and meter
are spot-on.


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    Thanks Janice, for your empathetic review, and uplifting comments,, Roy
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Oh, Roy, this is just lovely ... I just know that Brooke's family will be blessed with so many tributes and recollections to read over time... she sounds like a wonderful person! :) Yvette


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    Thanks Yvette, for your empathetic review, and uplifting comments,, Roy
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This is the most beautiful tribute to our dear Brooke written and it brought back the tears in my eye. Thank you for your lovely and gracious words, I especially love the line 'Yet dust produces pearls'. She will be dearly miss by those fortunate to have known her. Thank you so much for posting this for us.


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    Thanks Sasha, for your empathetic review, and uplifting comments,, Roy
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A very well-written poem and a wonderful tribute to Brooke. It seems I missed the honor to know this beautiful lady just after her illness takes her away, I joined FanStory in June 2015.


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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    Thanks Sandra, for your empathetic review, and uplifting comments,, Roy
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Yes, she was a jewel. She helped me more than one can imagine. A great tribute my brother. I could always count on her to catch things and correct with respect.


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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    Thanks Ben, for your empathetic review, and uplifting comments,, Roy
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Hi Roy,
I have read lots of poems about Brooke these past few days. I never met her, but she sounds like a lovely lady.
Just a couple of things:
- in line four, shouldn´t it be fill instead of fills?
- you wrote without as two words.
Thanks for sharing.


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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    Thanks Maria, I'll take a look, bless you for this wonderful review, blessings, Roy

reply by Maria Jose Garcia on 23-Mar-2019
    You're welcome.
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Hello Roy, what a lovely tribute to Brooke. Your words are beautiful and your author notes are as meaningful as your poem -'Earth's time can't tarnish gold.
Yet dust produces pearls.' - This alone says so much. Just gorgeous.

Warm regards Dorothy x


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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    Thanks Dorothy, for your empathetic review, and uplifting comments,, Roy
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