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Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)


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a collection of posts honoring a friend

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A beautiful tribute to Brooke here Roy and you captured the essence of her dedication to her poetry and help she gave to others, I didn't have the pleasure to know her, love Dolly x


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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    Thanks Dolly, for your empathetic review, and uplifting comments,, Roy
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Such a beautiful tribute poem, Roy! Love that line, "yet dust produces pearls" which plays on her pen name. I'll have to wait until Heaven to meet her.

One thought about the formatting of the poem, it would be good to add a bunch of blank lines (maybe 9 or 10) so that the poem starts after the picture. I have this problem with the Advanced Editor all the time.


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
    I've already tried it dear Helen, several times,but thank you for the wonderful comments and review, Blessings, Roy
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Roy,

What beautiful sentiments. You always have a certain way with words, but I have to believe you've worked even harder than usual on this on. It's just precious.

I know the family will take comfort here. Thank you!


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    Thanks Robyn, for your empathetic review, and uplifting comments,, Roy
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Yet dust produces pearls.oh Roy I love pearls because adversity and pain produces them. And in heaven the gates of heaven are suffering wrought. It's Christ's open arms pearls-onified. And Brooke was so precious a gift to us all...it's so sad
God bless


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    Thanks Jenny, for your empathetic review, and uplifting comments,, Roy
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Beautifully true.
She was always so helpful and kind.
She addressed everyone by name, and
didn't mind repeating the same
punctuation corrections over and over.
I loved her fanciful writing.
A lovely tribute Mr. Roy,
Blessings...


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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    Thanks Judy, for your empathetic review, and uplifting comments,, Roy

reply by Irish Rain on 22-Mar-2019
    You're welcome!!
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Hi Roy,

This is a lovely tribute to Brooke :) She is smiling down from heaven enjoying your poem. Has it really been since 2015 when she took ill? It doesn't seem like four years. Wow.

Great words in this poem.

Joy xx


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    No it doesn't Joy, I always expected her back, but God needed another gifted poet in Heaven. Thank you Joy, blessings, Roy
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Poignant and beautiful tribute to our beloved Brooke. Very well done. I have missed her for five years since she had to leave us. I had hoped she would return, but now that hope is gone, I'll listen for her poems in the heavens--each time a gentle breeze passes by or a sunbeam breaks from behind a cloud.


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    Yes poetry, is all around us, it's the words of heaven, creation's songs. Silently written, thank you Phyllis, much appreciated, blessings, Roy
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Hi Roy,

This is a beautiful tribute to our sister poet, Brooke. I didn't have the pleasure of knowing her, as she was active here during my long absence. I sure wish I'd had the opportunity to get to know her. Thank you for sharing your work. Jan :-)


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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    Thanks Jan, for your splendid review, and llovely comments,, Roy
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Well-written tribute to your friend. I never knew her, but I've heard all good things about her through this site. Thanks for sharing this writing about her.


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    Thanks Bill for your splendid review, and llovely comments,, Roy

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Oh, Roy, this is a fantastic tribute to your friend. All of you loved her so much and respected who she was. I have learned who she was through you many beautiful offerings. One day we will all be in the hands of our Lord where I can meet her and we can all share poetry!

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 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
    That will be a wondeful day Sherry, all creation is the poetry of Heaven, and we are little clouds singing its praises, thank you dear girl, blessings, Roy
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