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Glow of hope.

Loop poem

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Aiona

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What a nice poem, and it follows the Loop structure. I like that it starts off on a gloomy note and yet ends with hope for the future. I didn't see any typos. Nice use of the Loop structure!

Comment Written 01-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 09-Apr-2019

Thank you very much.

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Rmocruz

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You have well constructed this brief verse in accordance with the loop poetry
contest rules. The well chosen words formatted in two quatrains clearly present this
positive message. An appropriate art choice enhances the theme.
An excellent writing overall.

Comment Written 26-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thank you very much.

reply by Rmocruz on 01-Apr-2019

You're welcome Sanku.

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Pam (respa)

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-Nice artwork and
presentation, Sanku.
-A good loop poem
with effective imagery
and smooth progression.
-I like the use of rain
and clouds as a theme
in verse one, and the light
as a symbol of hope in verse two.
-Good luck in the contest.

Comment Written 26-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thank you very much.

reply by Pam (respa) on 01-Apr-2019

You are welcome.

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coffeeandink

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Lol, my profile, sign and sell, in an authors words, hope. Enjoy, hope, smile at the characters and dream of being published. A contest entry. Lead to a book, which lead to another, hope. Smile, as you read spring, hope. Those teams don't walk to the game, hope. My kids didnt play, steroids, kept them home. La Braun pure muscle, hope.

Comment Written 26-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thank you very much.

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Ross E Silke

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I like the tone of this poem and its meaning is beautifully hidden beneath the petals of the words to produce a wonderful flower to read into and discover for oneself. It highlights some good points for the read to take with them. Nice images and its packed with meaning to unwrap in each line. Interesting and colourful. You've followed the restricts well for this with the words repeating at beginning of each line; well done. A strong composition for the pool.

Comment Written 25-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thank you very for this poetically worded review.

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Gail Denham

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Nice poem - good job on the senyru. Win over the dark - a good idea. Try to keep the spirits up. A very nice job. We need to ignore the downpour, which is very difficult at times. Good luck on the ratings.

Comment Written 25-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thank you very much.

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Miss Sherry

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A very lovely loop poem with a beautiful piece of artwork. I feel the emotion in these words. There are times when we must use all our inner strength to keep going...to ignore the pain or sorrow. This is so well presented.

Comment Written 25-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thank you very much.

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Lance Loria

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Eye-catching and colorful artwork to enhance your poem. A well written loop poem that flows easily. I enjoyed the read. Good luck with the contest. Good work.

Comment Written 25-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thank you very much.

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Mastery

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Very well done, Emma. I haven't seen many "loops" on here but this one ranks right up there with the best of them. I do not know how you manage to think of ways to continue the loop through the entire poem. I enjoyed it, my friend. Bob

Comment Written 24-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thank you very much ,Bob.-Santha(not Emma-smile)

reply by Mastery on 01-Apr-2019

So sorry, I always seem to get the two of you confused. Bless you, Santha. Bob

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Artasylum

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Great job with your Loop Poetry Contest entry... strong, cohesive message about hope eternal... Good luck Sanku and always look forward to your posts... yours, diana

Comment Written 24-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thank you very much.

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