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Sometimes a Good Thing...

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LovnPeace
 
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This is easy to do in this day and age as we become just a number. Not good for those seeking attention. Alone in a crowd. Well done. Blessings, Barbara


 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Hey LovenPeace... great name... thanks so much I'm honored... yours, diana
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"Lost in a Crowd" of ordinary people, who "Live lives of quiet desperation." Familiar ideas expressed well. Sufficient rhymes to satisfy the prompt. Excellent post.


 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Indeed LIJ Red... perfectly analyzed... yours, diana
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I found this write a super effort, captivating in its presented written appeal, deposited viewpoint a thought-provoking fresh concept origin in origin. All in my opinion of this work.


 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    TPAC... from you I'm in shock... thanks for your review... yours, diana
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This is terrific, diana. The way I figure it, hiding in plain sight is the very best place to hide.

A most unique voice here and a fine rhyming poem too.

Best of luck to you with the Contest Committee. :)

Gloria


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Hey Gloria... always a treat... yours, diana
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It reminds me how insignificant we can feel even when surrounded by hundreds of people.
Pulling my hood down tight
Magically I disappear
With the faltering light
Beautiful and so clever
God bless


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Hi Jenny... I want to send out my condolences to you. Your beautiful country has been through a lot this week... thanks so much for this wonderful review. yours, diana
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A nicely done rhyming poem for the contest. I wish you the best in the contest. May your week be filled with joy, peace and love.
Patricia


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    I send that blessing right back to you pateclaw!
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You did a great job, Diana, with your contest entry. Your words flow well, the rhymes are good, there is some alliteration, the picture is appropriate, and the message clear. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    thanks ever so Jan... always a pleasure!
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"Anonimity", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP READING and I'll KEEP WRITING. This is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Thanks so very much duchess... I'm so honored by your stellar review. yours, diana

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 25-Mar-2019

    You're welcome diana.
    You certainly deserved the stellar review.
    Take care and God bless,
    the Duchess :))) :)))
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I like the opening line and the irony within.... "alone in the crowd".... and the portrayal of hustle and bustle of activity. The third verse has a likewise "busy" feel to it. Pity the center two lines of verse 2 are longer and slow down the pace just a little.

I like the poem and have marked accordingly, but one thing did occur to me. A person wearing a hoodie (stated in Verse 3) is going to stand out in the pictured summer crowd where everyone else is bare-headed.

Bill (WildWithWords


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Not at all in LA... it is standard garb...
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I like it, Dee. You have not been around a lot lately, but when yi finally do pop up, you have some good stuff to show us, huh?

These lines for instance:

"Barraged with life's sounds,
suffused with ambient noise."

Good job. Bob


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Thanks kiddo... always happy to hear from you...
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