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Kingsrookviii
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Wow. I stand in awe of this poem. The language is perfect and it reads as if written by a master, which indeed it has been. This straight forward style is something I've been thinking of attempting and it comes so naturally to you. Therefore, I will bookmark, revisit and learn from this. Have a great day. Bruce.


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Wow... from you Kingsrookviii... high praise and a true honor... I'm at a loss for words.... Yours, diana
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Great rhyming poem. I think you have written it very well, and the picture is also a great addition. Thanks for sharing your talent, and keep on sharing with us!


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    thanks so much Randa!!!!
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Mark D. R.
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A fun rhyming verse accompanied by an anonymous crowd scene illustration.

I especially like your last four lines.

Some of us do want to get lost in the crowd. LOL

Good luck in your contest entry.

Mark


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    I would be one of those people... thanks kidd for the review...
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I truly enjoyed the rhyming of this poem. I'm a bit old fashioned liking rhyme. Lol. Good colorful and complimentary artwork too. A nice entry for the contest so good luck.


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Hey, kiddo... thanks so much for your wonderful review... yours, diana
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I think this is a good entry for the Rhyming Poem contest.
Your well rhymed verse has a clear message. One that we all know and understand, I think.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Hey, kiddo... thanks so much for your wonderful review... yours, diana
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It is so easy to feel alone in a crowd, more so than being alone with no one around. I liked your rhyming poem a lot, because it describes this perfectly. And your final line, 'hiding in plain sight' that is probably the best way to hide. :)) Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Hey, kiddo... thanks so much for your wonderful review... yours, diana
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Your hoodie is like Harry Potter's Cloak of Invisibility! Whenever I get asked that age-old question about "What super power would you like to have?" I always say, "Invisibility." So, naturally, this poem appeals to me very much! Being able to fly under the radar is a plus. Nice job here!


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    You got it exactly right... I love my hoodie... thanks so much Rachelle
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I can really relate to this poem as I sometimes enjoy annonimity and this describes the feeling really well. Great artwork and presentation. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    thanks so very much Jenin...
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Loved the sounds of this poem as well as the clear meaning. Sometimes the loneliest place is in the middle of a crowd of strangers and the "disembodied voices" blend into "ambient noise." Really well done, Diana!


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Hey kiddo... thanks for your terrific review. yours, diana
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Hello, Diana.
There are few things worse than being in a room full of people yet feeling all alone.
Everyone just goes about their business, conversing and consorting. You feel as if you might as well be a cheap piece of artwork hanging on the wall.
Your rhyming poem says basically the same, although you've managed to do so far more poetically than I have here in my review.
I wish you nothing but the very best in the Rhyming Poem Contest.
~Dean


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Hey Dean... ditto and all of the above... always look forward to your singular point of view. yours, diana

reply by Dean Kuch on 24-Mar-2019
    My pleasure as always, Diana.
    ~Dean
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