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Sometimes a Good Thing...

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Mrs. KT
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Hello diana!
I so appreciate the sentiments expressed in your well-crafted offering. I, too, love to be "hiding in plain sight!"
If I may share one line which you may or may not consider to rework for verb tense:
Barraged with life's sounds,
suffuse(d) with ambient noise.

Thank you for sharing!
diane


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    You are my angel... fixed and thanks as always...

reply by Mrs. KT on 24-Mar-2019
    My pleasure, diana! :)
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Such a cool offering for the contest, Diana --- don't we all just wish for those times when we can just become one with the scenery! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    thanks so much kiddo...
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True isn't it? We can totally disappear in a crowd. Esp. if you're short, old, or too young, plain, fat, or using a walker. Funny how people just pass you by.
You describe it so well - thanks for the thought behind the poem.


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Thanks so much to you for your stellar/plus-one review... I'm humbled. yours, diana
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A very nice reading poem. I like to be anonymous also. I can't see a thing wrong with what you have written. The color and picture set it off nicely. Good job. Shirley


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    thanks ever so Shirley...
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24chas
 
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This was a good read, Diana. I loved the flow in it and the thought behind it. I agree with you, it's fun to be anonymous. You can be voyeuristic and it's fascinating. Great job.


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



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    My favorite thing and not in a pervy kind of way...

reply by 24chas on 24-Mar-2019
    Glad you took it that way. That's the way I meant it.
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Good poem. I had a similar poem that I wrote last week called Faceless. I know how you feel sometimes you just want to be part of the scenery. Crowds are like white noise. The fuzzyness of the old TV's


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



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    Thanks ever so Yvon... Much Appreciated... yours, diana

reply by Yvon on 24-Mar-2019
    You are welcome!!!
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Thank you for sharing the feeling of being anonymous. I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains and your focus on sounds. The crowd picture is a good parallel image. Best wishes in the competition- Joan


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Thanks so much Joan for your voice of confidence... yours, diana
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Oh so true, Diana. I agree. I love being anonymous. Going where no one knows me and I just enjoy being myself. Great job with this interesting poem. Good luck in the contest. Marily


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



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    Hey Marilyn... thanks so much for your wonderful review...
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I love the rhymes and I love the anonymity. This feels like you had great fun writing it, Diana, and it shines through.

My favourite line, "Barraged with life's sounds,
suffuse with ambient noise."

Best wishes in the contest.




 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    thanks so much Sandra... so very much appreciated and thanks again for stopping by... yours, diana

reply by Sandra Elizabeth Williams on 24-Mar-2019
    My pleasure!
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A very well-written rhyming poem about disappearing in a crowd where you feel anonymous and safe of any personal interaction. It is good for the soul from time to time to escape our own problems for a while.

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 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Is it every Sandra... thanks for reading. yours, diana
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