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Mummy


Being a mother is the best.

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jaybird1
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There is so much sweetness and loving care involved in motherhood.Your beauty as well
as your grandkids beauty comes shining through in this splendid portrayal.I can't comment
much because of my cataract ridden old eyes, but felt a need to comment on this beauty.
I also loved the rhyme you wove throughout.-Jaybird


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
    Thank you you made my day.
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Gail Denham
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Wonderful couch full of grandkids. When you sign on as a mother, it's a life's work. All of a life. I'm so thankful to be mother of four and grandmother to triple that. Some of our g.kids are older and have begun families. Our life's work is never over, as a mother.
My husband and I decided, early on, that we're try to be around wherever our kids and grandkids settled. So we are. (Our parents all worked till older age and lived too far to be with our kids much).
Good for you to nurture them.
A warm and fuzzy poem and would that all married women would follow this declaration. The abortion issue and rate of killings breaks my heart.
Thanks for the lovely poem.


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
    It breaks mine too. Hugs for such a kind wise review
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Pam (respa)
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-A very nice photo, Jenny.
-You have to be so proud.
-Thanks for the notes, too.
-I like the style of your poem
and the sentiments you express.
-You show many of the
qualities of a mother,
the most important-love.
-Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
    Love is the greatest hugs

reply by Pam (respa) on 28-Mar-2019
    You are right!
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Ross E Silke
 
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This is really sweet and beautiful! I like how it flows down the page and it's format is unique and inviting. I think you meant 'hopelessness' for the third line instead of 'hopeless,' would work better I think. Also, maybe separate the poem into its appropriate stanzas to help break up the thoughts and images as I kind of had to dissect it a bit to separate the thoughts more. I like the idea of hope singing. They must be delighted to have such a fun Mom. Enjoyable and I had to read a few times to look at all its treasure. I like ice cream dollops too sounds yummy!--new word for me as well. Best,


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
    Thanks
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Urial
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Hi Kiwi,

The grandchildren are adorable. I am a grandfather with the same number of grandkids, so your writing of them hits me in the heart and they will grow into thoughts in the poem and they will embrace them. Grand!

Peace be with you,
Urial


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
    Thank you
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"Mummy", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Being a mother must be sheer bliss. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2019



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    Hugs
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Colin Lowley
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Its brilliant Jenny, and mothers do deserve this treatment as i have often done the same to my mother in one shape or another. lovely words and completely worthy
of a family poem. Kind Regards Colin X
MUST FIND THEM PHOTOS FOR YOU LOL


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Thanks John..being a mum and granny are the best

reply by Colin Lowley on 27-Mar-2019
    They are beautiful by the way forgot to say x

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Thanks . We are going to visit our youngest grandson, he?s adorable
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I love this, it makes me (as a mother) feel so joyful. I at first questioned the use of the phrase 'in time of hopelesss.' But it would work if the mother was quoting her child's use of the word hopeless, which may have been your intention. Well done!


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Thanks it flowed as I wrote it this way.
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This was a nice motherly poem. how mothers take care of their precious children. There is one recommendation I would give and that is on the third line change 'hopeless' to hopelessness. just to me sounds fuller.


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Thanks Yvon
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Teri7
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How sweet and adorable is this poem with the beautiful picture of your lovely grandchildren. You used very sweet and good words. I bet you have lots of fun with those sweet ones. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Love and blessings back Teri ...hugs

reply by Teri7 on 27-Mar-2019
    smiles!
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