Contact Us | En español    
         Join today or login

Status

New Here?
Sign Up
Fast! Three Questions.

Already a member?
Login

Contests

Lune Poetry Contest
Deadline: Today!

True Story Flash
Deadline: In 4 Days

5-7-5 Poetry Contest
Deadline: Jun 8th

Minute
Deadline: Jun 14th

Share Your Story
Deadline: Jun 16th


Writing Classes

0 classes available. Click here locate a class and to learn more.

Rank

Poet: None
Author: None
Novel: None
Reviewer:None
Votes: None






Reviews from
Mummy


Being a mother is the best.

  33 total reviews 
Comment by
barbara.wilkey
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
 
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
  Rank:  5
Review Stars
  
 Rank:  38
 

#5 Ranked Novelist
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
I agree 100%. Being a mother was great but being a grandma is even better. I so enjoy my 5 grandchildren. Thank you for sharing this wonderfully written poem with us. Family is everything.


 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Amen
Comment by
Artasylum
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
 
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
 
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Kiwi... this stole my heart... those precious faces so innocent and yes so safe...
I'll be the touch on the hand
Freshly squeezed
Love
I'll bake the pie in your sky
I'll give the dollop of ice cream


 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Thanks so much
Comment by
susand3022
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  29
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  23 (+3)
Author Rating For Novels
  Rank:  32
Script Rating
  Rank:  8
Review Stars
  Rank:  16
 

#8 Ranked Script Writer
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Yes Jenny, they do say that the grandchildren are the greatest thing... because you can enjoy them for as long as you want and you can spoil them too, as it's your grandparently perogitive... then you can give them back! LOL


 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Yes...there?s all the love but not the responsibility
Comment by
BeasPeas
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  18
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  23
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Hi Jenny. The photo of your grandchildren is priceless. All smiling, no one crying, all lined up on the couch. Your poem describes the joy they bring us and the love we bring to them. Marilyn


 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Yes ..oh I wish I had a photo of their parents being goofy so they smiled...LOL
Comment by
royowen
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  1
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Review Stars
  
 
 Rank:  2
 

#1 Ranked Poet!

#2 Ranked Reviewer
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
You seem to have the same number of grands that we have dear Jenny, and aren't they lovely? I'm a very proud patriarch, I know exactly what you mean thematically. I can leave this earth satisfied with the work of my hands, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Amen. I?m praying it forward. It does my heart good that they are all in church and have family devotional to teach these darlings about God

reply by royowen on 26-Mar-2019
    Well done Jenny.
Comment by
2019 Poet of the Year
Dolly'sPoems
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  2
Review Stars
  
 Rank:  1
 

#2 Ranked Poet

#1 Ranked Reviewer!
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Your grandchildren are adorable Jenny! Such happy delightful faces! I bet they are a hand full but also a pleasure. Being a Mother or Grandmother is a joy, I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
    Thanks Dolly
Comment by
Ben Colder
CHARLES EZELL
SHERIDAN
 
Poet Rating
 
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
  Rank:  13 (+1)
Script Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  104
 
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
I love this. It hits home to this old man. The photo is precious and the poem is right on. My blessings to you. Thank you for making my day. You did well.


 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Ben, you made my day with a six...wahoooo
Comment by
dovemarie
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  127 (+3)
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  151
Author Rating For Novels
 
Script Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  230
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Dear kiwijenny, You must love being a mother, grandmother and a preschool teacher too. This has nice imagery and rhyme, and the picture of your five grandchildren is cute. Blessings, Dove


 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Thanks Dove ...they are the cutest kids in the world.
Comment by
Sally Law
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  35
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  4
Author Rating For Novels
  Rank:  6
Review Stars
  Rank:  19
 

#4 Ranked Author

#6 Ranked Novelist
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
The higher calling. I adore my kids and grandkids as you do. It is the best crop of seed well sown. My married son and father of my grandkids, seems to appreciate me the most. The older he gets, the more thankful he becomes of the childhood he had.

Your grandchildren are adorable and the little blond girl has your smile!
All my best,
Sal :+)


 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Same isn?t it wonderful
Comment by
robyn corum
Word Twister
Story Catcher
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  22
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  18
Author Rating For Novels
 
Script Rating
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  37
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Jenny,

First of all, those little kiddos are ADORABLE! Just too cute for words -- and how did you get them all to look at the camera and SMILE?? That's a miracle for a mom! hahaha

This was a bit of a free-thought free verse. Different. But cute. A couple of suggestions:
1.) To help in times of hopeless(ness)

2.) A cure to your broken(ness) [or broken hearts, etc.)
--> just make sure you complete all those thoughts

Thanks~!


 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    I?m ADHD it?s a challenge lol

reply by robyn corum on 25-Mar-2019
    Me, too!
  Previous Page  1 2  -3-  4  Next Page 


Market your book.
Advertising options.
Promote your favorite work here with the Reader Weekly certificate.

Click here for info.


Share or Bookmark
  Contact Us | En español | Advertise With Us

© 2015 FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy