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Being a mother is the best.

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patcelaw
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Across The Room

When you look across the room,
And see your grand children smile,
Why not stop everything,
Just to play with them a while?
For all too soon the years,
May take them to a distant place,
And many will be the days,
You'll long to see their face.
Don't let those precious years,
Slip by until they're grown,
To take some time to cherish them,
And make your love well known.
For as you strive to love them,
The way God wants you to,
You'll build such precious memories,
That they'll show their love to you.
(C)Patricia Lawrence


 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Oh thanks Patricia. I love my kids and now grandkids so much. Hugs Moms and Mums unite
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Shirley McLain
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Is that your clan? They are beautiful happy children. I loved the poem and how you create their world as a mother. Didn't see a thing wrong. Have a great day. Shirley

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 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Those are my 5 grandkids yes.
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Joy Graham
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That is a lovely bunch of grandchildren you have there :) Healthy and happy, and clearly approving of their wonderful grandmother.

I enjoyed your poem today. Love the theme. I love the style you used here. Is it a free verse sketch type of style? It's adorable and suits the whole presentation.

You put a smile on my face. Grandmothers unite!

Joy xx

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 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
    Amen...yes free verse is my thing
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