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Contest entry: The Deep Secret

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diamondbogle
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Im captivated :) I thought it was very well done and thought out. I don't know if it was meant to be kinda funny but I laughed. I think it'll do well in the contest.


 Comment Written 02-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
    Thanks for your review and kind wishes..

    Yes it is funny, though not as direct as my usual style.

    Thanks,

    Richard.
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People who know their labels will most definitely know it's a Tommy Hilfiger, and they will also notice the worn save more shoes and frayed belt.

Really well written entry into this contest and the secret of course, Not Victoria, will be keep secret.

Best of luck to you in the booth with this delight.

Gloria


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Hi Gloria,

    Yes, some people will know it's a Hilfiger. But none of those I have met. I live in a "hillbilly" town! The 1950's attitudes round here give me cause for mirth, and some of it seeps into my writing!

    Thanks.
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Hi Contest Author,

This is a great story and a super contest entry. I am certain there are a good many professionals who hold this secret. Best of luck and thanks for sharing. Jan


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Hi Jan,

    Fanstory has made this a blind contest, but I think it's no secret to you who I am!

    Ha ha ha!

    Will attempt to post a picture of my shirt, attached to a poem, or a new short work. Sometime.

    Maybe call it "The Comical Shirt," in which a very unsuccessful stand up comedian gets a new shirt.

    Then Hey Presto! his luck changes.

    Obviously it's how you tell em.

    So I'd better start making up some good jokes.
    .
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