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A Plough, though no Trough.


A very silly rhyming poem

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Debra White
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Richard :)
What ARE you on about?! Have you been on the pop?!
You made me laugh, which is always a good thing :D
Thanks for sharing your little bit of bonkers!
Best wishes as always, Debra :)


 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019



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    Debs,

    Thanks for your encouraging words.

    Teach the children this sentence:

    "Though I thought you brought enough snuff to make everyone cough."

    Thanks,

    Richard.
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Unless we are really tough,
it may never be quite enough
could be those who hate our stuff,
so we move on calling their bluff.
Patricia


 Comment Written 30-Mar-2019



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    Hi Pat,

    Hope all's well with you.

    Thanks for you poetic comment.

    Richard.
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Silly silly. A fun poem with rhyme. An appropriate silly photo too. Fun colors. No edits or adjustments noted so no orher critique from me.
Good luck writing.


 Comment Written 30-Mar-2019



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    Hi Lance,

    Thanks for your comments.

    Sometimes I like to just play with words.

    Richard.
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Oh, but what fun nonsense can be... and this is certainly no exception! :) ;) And that goat? He's just perfect! :) ;) Thanx for the smile and enjoyable read this afternoon -- great job on the 'nonsense' melody! :) ;)


 Comment Written 30-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
    Thanks Yvette,

    and hope all goes well with you.
    I should become your fan.

    Thanks,

    Richard.
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Yes, I like your version of silly... the English language provides plenty of silly variations to utilise. The photo is a bit blurred but the sheep's mad eyes add to the effect. I am an Aussie so I know what a chough is but you might need to explain in your notes to northern hemisphere readers (I think it is more of a 'downunder' bird).


 Comment Written 30-Mar-2019



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    Hi Lisa,

    Yes I put a note in.

    Somehow the poem was released before I intended.

    The final verison is now on view.

    Thanks,

    Richard.

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reply by LisaMay on 30-Mar-2019
    All good. That happens to me too.
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Hi Richard,

Ha ha. This is a really good poem, given your notes to explain. I love the picture of that goat, too. Nothing to suggest you consider revising. Thanks for a chuckle. Jan


 Comment Written 30-Mar-2019



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    Hi Jan,

    Thanks for your comments and all the stuff you post.

    Richard.

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