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Put The Seat Down


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Janice Canerdy
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You have made effective use of all your syllables and the accompanying
artwork to present a hilarious means of dealing with a problem! What
WOULD a man say . . . ?!


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
    Hi Janice, LOL....not sure...but it's a fact...they leave the seats up...LOL..thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...love you...Linda xxoo
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Bill Schott
 
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This 5-7-5, Put the Seat Down, has the right set up and finds a way to resolve the seat up or down problem. Of course, it's a half-ass solution. : )


 Comment Written 08-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
    HI Bill, LOL...but it still half fixed...LOL...thank you for a great review my friend...love Linda xxoo
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Lance Loria
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Funny artwork. Did you find that first and then write the poem? lol A good 5-7-5 syllable count. This is a fun poem and the artwork compliments it so well. No edits or adjustments necessary.


 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
    Hi Lance, thank you for a great review...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
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Miss Sherry
 
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Priceless!! I had to look at the picture to see if I was seeing what I thought I didn't see, LOL How clever- maybe more families need this.
Just a wonderfully funny write!


 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
    Hi Sherry, thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...love you...Linda xxoo

reply by Miss Sherry on 08-Apr-2019
    Loved it and still laugh...love and blessings.

reply by Miss Sherry on 08-Apr-2019
    Loved it and still laugh...love and blessings.

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019
    Smiling back at you...xxoo love
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babykoala
 
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Very funny and light hearted. Made me chuckle! Live the picture and yes this is a massive issue in my household too and this has given me inspiration haha.


 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
    Hi Baby, LOL...my late husband would leave the seat up at night...and it?s a rude waking when you fall in...he did better years later...LOL...thank you for a great review...so glad it made you chuckle...love Linda xxoo
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DeborahWrite
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Dear Author,
I enjoyed your Haiku poem and your humor! Yes, you did solve the problem and your picture is great! I ask everyone to lower the seat to avoid my kittens from exploring!
My best,
Deborah


 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
    Hi Deborah, LOL...thank you for a wonderful review...I?m so glad you like it....love you...Linda xxoo

reply by DeborahWrite on 07-Apr-2019
    I love your wonderful writing Linda! Love to you, Deborah xo

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
    Thank you sweet girl....smiling big...xxoo. Love

reply by DeborahWrite on 07-Apr-2019
    :) xo
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Judy Swanson
oswaneej
 
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Oh my - everyone has dealt with and argued over this situation. It is most critical in the night - when in a hurry in the dark. And, it is always we women who must adapt and/or clean up the mess. "Just lean on the wall..." what a great line in your notes. Got a giggle from me! Judy


 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
    Hi Judy, yes it is most critical...my late husband would leave it up at night...it?s a rude awaking when fall in...LOL...thank you for a wonderful review....I love Linda xxooo

reply by Judy Swanson on 08-Apr-2019
    You are welcome, Linda. Judy
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Perhaps a half-assed solution.
I find this to be very clever as humorous.
Now he can at least pee in peace.
The photo-art seals the deal.
Well crafted.


 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
    Hi R, and she can do as well...LOL...ya just hate going to the bathroom...and falling in...kind of blows the mood...thank you for a great review...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo

reply by Rmocruz on 06-Apr-2019
    You are quite welcome Linda.
    When I was married my then wife
    purchased a thickly padded toilet seat
    that had to be held up if one wished to pee while standing.
    Rich

reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
    LMBO...Rich, you kind of had to multi task...LOL...xxoo love

reply by Rmocruz on 06-Apr-2019
    Indeed!
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Sandra Montanino
 
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So funny. I love it. This is my own pet peeve with my sons and husband. They just don't get it. I love your visual. Good luck with your contest. Very, very funny.


 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
    HI Sandra, my late husband would leave the seat up at night...and I would go to sit down...and fall in...LOL...it's a great wake up call...I know how you feel...thank you for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
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livelylinda
 
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Linda two: I laughed out loud at this fun poem! Oh, the things we suffer through in our lifetimes! Originality here along with the proper 5/7/5 syllable count. Good one, young lady! Hope to see you soon. Linda


 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
    HI Dos, LOL...my late husband would leave the seat up at night...and there were a few times I fall in...it's a true wake up call in the middle of the night...LOL...so glad you like it sweet girl...I was thinking about the first of June...but I have to wait for Kristy's plans....LOL...I'll let you know...thank you for a great review you...love you much...Linda xxoo
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