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Dance of Chance


I -5-7 poem

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flylikeaneagle
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flylikeaneagle - Nancy Ann Gee
 
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Sanku: our life may seem like Chance. God has plans
and purposes for us before we were born. I like how you
can be up or down. Enjoy your sons and music. I sing in
two choirs. flylikeaneagle


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much for these lovely words.
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Jmf4119
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Very nice 1-5-7 poem for the contest Sanku. "Life is a Dance" and you're so right, we can go sky high or fall in dumps.

Well done.

Blessings
Janet


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much
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Maria Jose Garcia
 
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Yes, things can go both ways when we take a chance. But it's worth it.
I love the title of your poem.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much.
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A clever statement, given thought-provoking concepts detailing its bottom line to all things, presenting fact either fly of die judgement upon ones reality. All in my opinion of this work.


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thank you once again.
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Tina Crute
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What a great little poem with a great message. You compare risk-taking to a dance, and do it well. we can dance slow and steady and not try bold moves , or we can go all out and reach the sky, or... trip over our own feet, haha! Great write:)


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much for your encouraging words.

reply by Tina Crute on 18-Apr-2019
    You're so welcome.
    I love reviewing things
    that have a message or
    purpose presented in a
    fresh way or perspective!
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Hi Sanku, you have to read for the ski...go for your goals in life...and even if you fall...you tried...you'll never know if you don't try...love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture...very nicely written...love you...Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much.

reply by l.raven on 18-Apr-2019
    your so welcome...always...love xxoo
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An unescapable truth; Life certainly in a Dance of Chance and I think this conveys just how much we should strive to be our best whether or not we got dealt a bad hand. Very Inspiring and foreshadowing all the same. Brilliant work!


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much.
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Hi, Santha. You have an excellent entry here in the 1-5-7 poetry contest. It is a thinking person's poem for sure. Lie is a dance after all, isn't it? Bless you, my friend. Bob


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much,Bob.
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very clever
very well thought out and this piece really draws ones in,
you have a good imagination and a very good writer.
I love the artwork
I enjoyed this very much
I hope the very best in the contest
donette1914 4/10/2019


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much.
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Aussie
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Did you draw the artwork for your poem? I wish you well in the contest. Dance of Chance is just like our life paths, highs and lows; sometimes we go down and sometimes we reach for the stars. Well done friend.


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much. no I did not it is from fanart
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