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Dolcan Pie.


(re-edited) limerick

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Comment by
Y. M. Roger
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This was a really fun 'double entry', Tracy, and it certainly shows your original style!! :) And I see that it made it into the voting! :) ;) Again, I apologize for the confusion -- will be sure that it is specified up front. ;) ;) Thanx for joining in! :) ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Hi, Yvette

    Actually, I withdrew it as it was a bit daft without the second limerick :)

    I look forward to the next!

    thank you for your review and stars, me dear.


    kind regards

    tracey
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You have come up with a darn good Limerick about dolphins and pecans. Unbelievable! I never would've thought of a Dolcan pie. Sounds pretty disgusting.
Bill


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
    Cheers Bill
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A very well-written Limerick. We sometimes don't pick our friends with care and they will not hesitate to roll you up and make from you a pie when they have the slightest chance.


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    Thank you
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Exceptional
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You have out performed the writing prompt with deliciously bawdy
limerick in tandem. An equally bawdy visual would be icing on the cake.
Totally enjoyable, thanks.


 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
    Thank you :)

reply by Rmocruz on 26-Apr-2019
    You're welcome.
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This is a clever, fun duo of Limericks and I thought it so inventive and easy to read and it made me laugh too! Yes you made me want to vote for your poem! He he he, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you very much, Dolly, for your generous rating and encouraging review.

    :)
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OMGsh. . .this is dolphins and pecans gone crazy! Very creative but I think I'll pass. What a fun, silly read. I think it's good to go into the bazaar at times. I don't do it often enough but dolphins and nuts just don't move me.


 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you, Moongirl

reply by moongirlwriter on 16-Apr-2019
    :)
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OMG. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! I was going to enter, but what could POSSIBLY beat this hilarious, perfect entry?!! Not that you need it, but best of luck in this contest!! I can't wait to see who you are, Mystery Writer, because if I'm not a fan at this moment, I will be when your name is revealed. xo


 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you, Rachelle. Glad you enjoyed.
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Ha ha ha ha what a prompt...what a way to end ..a pie well it is pecan.. lol
I think I must try this ...I'd use a dolphin and an octopus as plural is octopi
Right?! Octopuses would be problematic...and where to fit the pecan? Hmmm
Difficult ...you did well
God bless


 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you, Jenny.

    You're funny... )
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This one certainly meets the contest requirements in every respect. I doubt if anyone will do better! Good luck with it! The non sequitur of the last line adds to the overall amusement.


 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
    Thank you, Tony.

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