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Bemused


... and a little depressed

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This free verse, Bemused, finds our hero either experiencing the blips of compassion that occur as a bit of testosterone leaves the body, or the first indications that he is slipping into madness.


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    Cheers Bill. Always appreciated. G
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I enjoyed this immensely and think it is a terrific entry for this free verse poetry contest. There are many that can relate to this, I know I can. Keep up the great work.


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    Too often for me. Cheers G

reply by Sasha on 21-Apr-2019
    I am doing my best to keep up to date with my inbox...never want to wake up to 10 ever again.
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I am often wondered sometimes what I just read. I was thinking it was me. I am glad it happens to others. I enjoyed reading your contest entry and wish you the best of luck.


 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
    Some days I just can't review. lol G
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I think we all go through those periods when we may be completely put 'off' by this or that. Not every post is exactly what we may wish to read. i just skip. Marilyn


 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank goodness for that little button. It can be a life-saver! lol
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Geez, I have the same reaction when I peruse the offerings in my message box. Some haikus, I just don't get as well as some poetry the judges seem prone to award a prize.


 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    This happens to me more & more. lol
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Pretty good contrast between the serious voice in the first stanza and the more tongue in cheek voice in the second. I like how you undermined all the pretentiousness with that simple expletive exclamation. Nice images too of the bleeding eyes and the pounding headache. estory


 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Many thanks as always. G
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Hi Gareth, I suppose what you mean in this free style poem, is that you read so many things and most of them rather bland. But then suddenly some writing catches your eye and you sit up straight. All the best. Ulla:)))


 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Yeah... something like that... ahem.

reply by Ulla on 16-Apr-2019
    Hahaha
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Cheers Mr. G;
> Some call it gall, but I call it Yachya, or the slaphappy scrotum rocking between a bulls legs. Chuckle!
>Some have it and some shouldn't even try.
>I like the way your definitively sensitive and yet aggressive provocative free verse has excused nothing and its vociferous satarism of what the author"s read is stated without any embellishing picture. None needed. Chuckle.
> Good luck in the contest and I mean it because some 48 year old college courses me to think out-of-the-box and be proud of it.
>Take care and have a good one.
Alx


 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    lol, many thanks Alex. G
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It's good to see you can be just as inelegant as elegant, I guess it comes from a need to appear as an insurgent, masked and unmasked. proving that humans have two sides, the real and the unreal, well done, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    me? bull in a china shop in real life. lol may thanks, Roy. G
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I know we're all wondering if you're referring to us personally. lol. But I see things that I feel the same way about. I don't want to work at understanding something. It should be written so that it's enjoyable without making it a chore. Some things are so poorly written, they make mine look good. hahahaha


 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Somedays, it just isn't worth it. lol Many thanks Yvonne. G
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