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Moms leave a legacy.

  41 total reviews 
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dragonpoet
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This is a heartfelt ode to a loved and loving mother. It is true that they are always in your heart always a part of you.

Congrats on placing in the contest.

Keep writing

dragonpoet


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
    It means alot that you took time to review this! Thank you.
    Blessings,
    Tina

reply by dragonpoet on 29-Apr-2019
    No problem, Tina.

    Joan
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Beri Bee
 
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Beautiful! She teaches me to be, is my favorite line. Congratulations on your well-deserved recognition. These are sacred memories preserved in picture and poem. Well done!


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
    Thank you so much! You're the only one who specifically mentioned that line. I try to be a lot like her, use her wisdom. Thanks for the review, and also your comments. They mean a lot!

    Blessings,
    Tina
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Beloved anyone or mom, whose love, care, teaching, would never die, you still remember her thru' songs, she is always with you, as you carry the legend; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
    Thank you for reviewing and for the compliment:) I will keep writing!:)
    Blessings,
    Tina

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
    Thank you for reviewing and for the compliment:) I will keep writing!:)
    Blessings,
    Tina
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RodG
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How many of us remember our mothers like you do yours? I like to envision the two of you singing hymns together. The fact she is still with you every day is what lifts the reader's spirits. Rod


 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
    Thank you, Rod. She's been gone quite awhile but I purposely copy some things she did, to carry on her legacy. Thanks for the lovely review and sentiment:)

    Blessings,
    Tina

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
    Thank you, Rod. She's been gone quite awhile but I purposely copy some things she did, to carry on her legacy. Thanks for the lovely review and sentiment:)

    Blessings,
    Tina

reply by RodG on 23-Apr-2019
    My pleasure. Rod

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
    :)
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I love this poem. . .a tribute to your mom, I expect? Our lives are somewhat parallel? I am a mom to 3 grown daughters (now I have grandchildren), I've always loved Jesus and am sure I have an angel on my shoulder; I was Office Manager for our business, then became a Business Owner and THEN a teacher. But, I am now single. . .for many years. :)
The poem made me think of my mom and a poem I wrote about my life growing up with my mom after she remarried. But, I've never written a poem about my relationship with my mom. Something I may have to consider now. Thanks. :)


 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
    Thanks for the review and I love the personal notes! Yes, you should write about your mom. It would be so special! I think there's a Mother's Day contest coming up... Thanks again for the review and compliment!

    Blessings on your day!

    Tina

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
    Thanks for the review and I love the personal notes! Yes, you should write about your mom. It would be so special! I think there's a Mother's Day contest coming up... Thanks again for the review and compliment!

    Blessings on your day!

    Tina

reply by moongirlwriter on 23-Apr-2019
    :)
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Hi Tina, I like the picture of your Mom, I think I've got that same frame with a picture of my mom in it, also one with my grandfather in it when he was 8 or 9, in his robes from church with a head full of banana curls all the way to his shoulders. Gorgeous!!! Wish they were mine! :)
Your poem is a lovely tribute to your mother and the ways you remember her each day, in her words, her song and your heart. I know I will do the same when the time comes. #92 tomorrow! :)


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    Thank you Susan for the night review and I'm so glad you can relate! My birthday is tomorrow too! Coincidence :-) tell your mom I said happy birthday! I really do appreciate Fairview and you take the time to give me a personal note about your mom :-)
    May God bless your day tomorrow and the rest of the week!
    Tina

reply by susand3022 on 17-Apr-2019
    Happy Birthday Tina! 😊🎂🍾🍷🍷🍷🍧🍧🍫🍬🍭(I hope you have a sweet tooth!) Make a wish! Cheers! Susan 😀

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Susan, this is so sweet,
    Literally, lol! Thank you so
    much. You started my
    morning off with a nice
    surprise! Yes I definitely
    have a sweet tooth!

    Tina
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June Sargent
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This is a beautiful tribute to all mothers past, present and future. I lost mine almost five years ago. Yet in my heart, I still talk to her every day. They are and will always be a part of us. Thank you for expressing these lovely sentiments in your poem.


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    I'm just so glad you related to it:) You're right... they will always be a part of us. Thank you so much for taking the time to review the poem and how you related to it. I appreciate the compliment of that. Blessings!

    Tina☺

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    I'm just so glad you related to it:) You're right... they will always be a part of us. Thank you so much for taking the time to review the poem and how you related to it. I appreciate the compliment of that. Blessings!

    Tina☺

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    I'm just so glad you related to it:) You're right... they will always be a part of us. Thank you so much for taking the time to review the poem and how you related to it. I appreciate the compliment of that. Blessings!

    Tina☺
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In my opinion, a truly lovely eulogy as tribute to your mother and a very special lady. I am certain she would be honored by your words and her forever presence in your heart. The image of your youthful mother complements the write, giving the reader a warm image of one dearly loved. Best of luck in the contest...


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    I appreciate you addressing different aspects of my poem. It helps me see it from another's perspective, if it relates to them. Your feedback is so appreciated! Momma was a warm person, so I am glad this feels that way ! Thank you so much!

    Blessings,

    Tina

reply by evesayshi on 17-Apr-2019
    You are very welcome indeed, Tina, my pleasure...Eve
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The poem has a tendency to make everyone of those who lost their mothers to identify with poet. The pathos in it is worth enjoying. Thank you very much for sharing such a beauty.


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
    Why thank you for the lovely review, which is a tribute of its own to her, as she was lovely:)
    I take your comments and compliment to heart. Its an honor to have anyone relate to my little poem. Thank you for your feedback. Its so appreciated!

    Tina
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Hi Tina, you want to see your mom...just look in the mirror sweet girl...I am sorry for your loss...but we will see them again...I believe that...and you are right...when someone you loves dies...a part of them remains...and a part of you goes...sigh...very well written my sweet friend...and your picture of your mom is beautiful...priceless...love your poem...Love you...Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thank you, Linda! Your review and personal thoughts are so so
    appreciated! Thanks for the reminder...we will see them again...what a great time that will be!
    You are much
    aporeciated,friend!
    Love and blessings!
    💗
    Tina

reply by l.raven on 16-Apr-2019
    you my sweet friend are always sooooooo welcome...and yes that will be a wonderful time...love you...and blessings to you as well...Linda xxoo
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