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A talltale about the Old West

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john mallahan
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Never been much into guns, but guess that's how the west was won. Or, are we just speculating? Again fine. We gotta write about, what we know...or has been told.

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 Comment Written 10-May-2019



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    Review received.
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I do so love those old western tales. Seems they have all but gone away so those willing must dig them up with their boot straps. Nicely done. This was a great read.


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019



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    Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate your review.

reply by moongirlwriter on 21-Apr-2019
    :)
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Well done western poem. Can you imagine living in a town like that. Sure wouldn't let my kids play in the front yard in some of those towns. But for some reason, the west drew outlaws easily.
Good job.


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate your review.
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A fun gun slinger story Brett, much enjoyed, a Wild West story full of action, I wish you luck with the contest, your story is a worthy entry, best wishes, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate your review.
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HI Brett, wish I had a six my sweet friend...******...this is a great story told...I am so glad some one stood up to them...and won...I love your story told...and loveeeeee this picture...Sam Elliott...WOW!!!...sooooo handsome...and an awesome actor...very well written...and I hope you do well in the contest...love Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 19-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this story in a poem. Appreciate your comments and the review.

reply by l.raven on 20-Apr-2019
    your so welcome Brett...Happy Easter my sweet friend...love Linda xxoo
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Hi Contest Author

Ha ha ha!) This is a great western story poem and a really good contest entry. Nothing to suggest you revise. Good luck, thanks for sharing, and Happy Easter. Jan :-)


 Comment Written 19-Apr-2019



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    Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate your comments and the review. Happy Easter to you too!
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Great entry for the story in a poem contest, and best of luck. You have a great story about law and order in the Old West. Interesting that the outlaws somehow became heroes, but that's the way it was. Maybe it was because Billy didn't run that he became a hero. Excellent work with the rhyme and flow in this, too. judi


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2019



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    Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate the review.

reply by judiverse on 18-Apr-2019
    You're very welcome. The rhyme went to well with your story, as did the wording. judi
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This was a good read, Brett. I loved the story. When I first came across the name Billy, I was thinking Billy the Kid. I liked the flow of the piece and the rhyme scheme gave it a rhythm like riding a horse. Nice job.


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate your review.
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Hi Brett, this is a wonderful free verse poem, and a whole new side to your very talented writing. Well,at lest, so it is to me.I loved it ad the story within. All the best. Ulla:))


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this story in a poem. Appreciate your review.
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Nice shoot em out western with the good guy winning. I especially like the picture you have displayed. He is one of my all time favorites. Great job. Have a nice day. Shirley


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this little story in a poem. Appreciate your review.
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