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fifty word flash

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I enjoyed this flash fiction story. The images are clear and realistic. Your first story--you came up with a good one. I, too, recently tried my hand at flash fiction. In fact, I'm in this contest, too. You're a formidable foe.


 Comment Written 21-Apr-2019


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This is a terrific entry into the contest. I can imagine all the neurons firing up in alarm at reading call 911 across a dollar bill. Is it old, is it new, but the third line gives us all the clues we need.

Really a fine job with this not so easy task and I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee.

Gloria


 Comment Written 19-Apr-2019


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Dribble Flash Fiction contest entry!! 50 words that work so well together! Very good pit viper! Do not see anything amiss. Continue to share your talent!!


 Comment Written 19-Apr-2019


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An interesting and engaging story even though it simple and short. you intrigue and make me wish there is more to read. this is a great flash fiction story, keep it up!


 Comment Written 19-Apr-2019


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This was great, Pit Viper. I really loved this flash fiction piece. If I had a six, it would be yours. I'm not sure why I love it so much, but it really caught my fancy. Great job.


 Comment Written 19-Apr-2019


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