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He Knew The Risks


but did it anyway

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Randa Dayle
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You disagree?? How dare you....LOL! I enjoyed your writing prompt. Charlie. A very interesting and different take on it for sure. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019



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    Much appreciated.
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LOL! LOL! Yes, those forums seem to be dominated by some who wish to rule the world. Never disagree with them, or do so at your ears peril. Well, in this case, your eyes peril. LOL! LOL!


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    Many thanks
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Yes, we do live in a climate where even the word 'but . . .' can lead to estrangement--and worse. I've read the other entrants, and I'm going to vote for this story. But I wish you'd told me a little about Charlie.
Maybe a sentence or two to explain why he was prone to say, 'I disagree'. I think that's part of the story. Just a thought.

Good luck.

Peace, Lee


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019



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    You could very well be right about that. Cheers
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Great story and it had so much truth to it. I didn't find any errors to tell you about. You did a very good job. Have a great afternoon/evening. Shirley


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019



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    Much appreciated.
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I Love this! This is genius, well thought out and very clever. Your use of the subject matter was brilliant. The message conveyed is thought provoking, true, and clear as the day. I enjoyed reading this and applaud you on a superbly written work. Very Well Done!


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
    Many thanks.
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This piece is a powerful statement for the times we are living through now. Your take on this phenomena of 'disagreeing' and then being attacked and vilified endlessly is something that marks the present culture.


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019



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    Cheers, Bill.
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Well done! I like how you dared to broach this subject with humor. You dared to talk about the issue of the forums and how serious they are. Good luck in the contest!

Bill


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    Many thanks, Bill.
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Ha ha ha... This is a terrific little story. It's quite comical. One must enter at their own risk and be prepared to take on the wrath of controversial opinions. lol. Poor Charlie. Nicely done, good luck! ~Kerry


 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019



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    Many thanks.

reply by Kerry Robinson on 25-Apr-2019
    You're very welcome.
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Yeah I know Charlie, he is the one who sat behind me in class always quiet and well mannered. Until the teacher spoke about his race... he jumped up and scream his rage... he did not agree, since then he is not let out of the cage. :) Charlie the orangutan. :) This is a good entry for the Charlie contest,


 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019



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    Charlie's an idiot... much appreciated.
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This was a clever use of the prompt, a take on the forums where we put our opinions out there where scrutiny may be brutal. The writing is impeccable--no errors in punctuation or word usage. Well done.


 Comment Written 24-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
    Much appreciated.
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