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acrostic free verse

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I love this vision giraffmang, a man true to his own journey. The artwork is perfect for this acrostic and makes a strong statement about your writing. Well done. :)


 Comment Written 03-May-2019



reply by the author on 04-May-2019
    Many thanks for checking this one out. GMG
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Oh very nice. You know an acrostic is good when you don't even realize it is one at first. It makes it feel less forced. This is beautiful and your word choices are perfect. I love your close. Seriously this is very well written. Nice alliteration in S several times. Such cadence, flows great.


 Comment Written 30-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 02-May-2019
    Many thanks for the great review and response/rating on this one. I really appreciate it. G
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It must've been a trying week for you as well. Like you said, come hell or high water we have to continue on. This old world hasn't beaten me yet. The poem is very well-written, your great word choice gets your strong message across nicely. Great job as always.


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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
    Much appreciated. G
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I've that one of those weeks that one doesn't wish on their worst enemy. I needed to read your contest entry. Thank you. Besides that I happen to be a huge fan of acrostic poems and yours did not disappoint. Good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
    Much appreciated, Barbara. G
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Hey!
>Saving the best for last.
>Cheers Mr. G;
> All was well my Poems today, Saturday, And I usually or tend to favor stories to give sixes, this is really good.
> One could have expounded exponentially and embellish this to hell, but you didn't.
>Love the picture set the ambience attitude and it creates a sense of well-being.
>A good cliché to start, but not all will be used, Publicly, but the spoken word hell sometimes taken negatively, but in this case, it's absolute is its strengthening of the piece.
>Got some for ya->



Come hell
Or high water,
My purse is alway,
Empty

Whilst my spouses
Hatred, bother,
Acomplish
Tensions?

My job
Acts as a band and Un-
Yielding!
>Chuckle!.
> Thanks for very entertaining piece of this acrostic poem many of the best consideration during the processes of election. Yeah?
> Take care and have a good one.
Alx


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
    Cheers Alex. G

reply by krys123 on 30-Apr-2019
    You betcha, Mr. G.
    Alx
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A very well-written acrostic poem about the little things that sometimes can get too much for us and we let it get us down from time to time. It is sometimes hard not to let something or someone makes you feel miserable.


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
    Thank you, Sandra.
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I really liked this. You had that rhythm in it that sounded like the flapping of wings, capturing that feeling of flying away. The nice alliterations gave it that soaring feeling, and it was so uplifting in tone, the whole thing soared and made me feel like I was escaping into the heavens from all the things flying after me. You get that feeling of a seagull gliding over the ocean, over the problems, and then the sea is a time honored metaphor of death, so you have that going for it as well estory


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
    Many thanks for the great response to this one. G
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A very nice post, G. Your acrostic warns not to treat others badly even if they do you. Turn the other cheek, so to speak. We're all captain of our own ship. Marilyn


 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
    Much appreciated, once again. G
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This is lovely. I wish I could honor this right now, but folks are getting me down now and I can't shake this one. God Bless you G. Barbara
ps:Thank you For your wisdom.


 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
    Sometimes it's a lot harder than others. G
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I had a bad week, last week and several friends were saying the same thing to me. Needless to say, I did not follow their advice and let my bad mood rule me.


 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
    It can be difficult but we usually bounce back at some point. G
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