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He was good with a knife

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Raffaelina Lowcock
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Bob, this is exceptional. Not a laughing matter but LOL! Obviously you are blessed with a rare talent for story telling and a rare imagination for concocting intriguing scenarios. The picture is ominous!


 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
    Thank you, Ralf. I appreciate the review and the six, but most of all I appreciate you. : )Bob

reply by Raffaelina Lowcock on 16-Sep-2019
    You certainly have a heartwarming persona that makes one feel special. Thank you!

reply by Raffaelina Lowcock on 16-Sep-2019
    You certainly have a heartwarming persona that makes one feel special. Thank you!

reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
    AWWWW. Thank you so much, Ralf. : ) Bob
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You viewed this character as if he was possessed by a demon from hell. A creative piece of work, maybe driving or sitting in the car, reaching for something in the glove-box. I could go on about what I learned through this skillfully described, short piece. Maybe because I elected to work on my grammar rather than take a course, as you wisely suggested. In genereal, time permitted the next best thing I could do. Thanks for your help, my friend.


 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
    Bless you, my friend. thank you for this review and stars. : ) Bob

reply by pbomar1115 on 19-Aug-2019
    You're welcome, Bob.

    Phillip
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Mary Wakeford
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I bear'd with and found it descriptive and found your Visionary with Anxiety. The #11 appears often between your artwork, (2) and again in the #117 under all time best. You built suspense for the reader until the last line with the sub sandwich. Well done!


 Comment Written 11-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
    Thanks again, my friend. : ) Bob
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A good laugh is very welcome close to the end of a hot day in the mid-south area. You have a stellar sense of humor and I very much enjoyed the encounter with some examples of it today. Write on!


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
    Thanks so much, Spangle. I appreciate you going back in my folio. : ) Bob
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Hey! Really neat. I haven't been back to your books--yet! I have joined a writers group here in Cape May County through the library. We are currently preparing an anthology of Cape May County writers and almost ready for publication. I have two stories, not one, but two selected for the book. Now I have time to read and comment.

I really love your characters names. Hope to be that inventive someday.

Jean K


 Comment Written 10-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
    Thank you, Highlander. I appreciate this outstanding reviewing. Bob
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I love this bit of dribble flash fiction. You should have won the contest. It's so clever and so much fun to read. Great job. And I like your photo. It not only matches your story, but he looks so ominous. A real killer with a knife and a yummy sandwich. LOL


 Comment Written 26-May-2019



reply by the author on 26-May-2019
    Thanks so much, Sandra. I appreciate this review. Just curious? I have been having some problems getting my notifications out on my posts. Did you receive one on my latest called "The Interview" Please let me know. Thanks so much afgin, Sandra. Bob

reply by Sandra Montanino on 26-May-2019
    I will check. I've been gone and have not been on top of this!

reply by the author on 26-May-2019
    Thank you, Sandra. I would appreciate it. Bob
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A good end twist to this Dribble flash fiction story Bob, between your words and the picture I thought he was after slicing more than a meatball sub. Enjoyed it,
cheers,
valda


 Comment Written 07-May-2019



reply by the author on 07-May-2019
    Thank you, Valda. I do appreciate you. Bob
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I thought this was funny. It draws you in giving you that feeling that there is an intense situation. You prepare for the upheaval that you believe is about to happen when, suddenly, you are left surprised and filled with laughter.

Love it, good luck.


 Comment Written 06-May-2019



reply by the author on 06-May-2019
    Thanks so much, Mia. Glad you liked it. Bob :)
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Hi Bob, yes the ultimate in anticlimaxes! No, definitely haven't lost your touch! Really like the 'frosted marbles' look into the glovebox. I've just popped in briefly, but it is nice to see your writing again, how ever pithy, my friend. Giddy


 Comment Written 04-May-2019



reply by the author on 05-May-2019
    My goodness, Giddy. Where have you been? LOL
    People like you are rare friends and writers to me. Please stsay in touch. :) Bob X
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brenda faye curtis
 
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I love this one! It's your style, which is just what the reader expects, and has a hysterical twist at the end. Don't apologize for this, cause it's perfect for the flash fiction format........!


 Comment Written 04-May-2019



reply by the author on 04-May-2019
    Thank you very much, Brennie. I am elated ths tyou liked it. :) Bob

reply by brenda faye curtis on 06-May-2019
    Looking forward to the next!
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