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Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Recap of chapters 1-16"

This is a sci-fi book especially for girls.

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LaRosa
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Thanks, Helen, for the catch-up. You haven't had a new chapter for a while and I'm behind on reviewing so this really helps me to feel a bit more familiar with what's going on.


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reply by the author on 12-May-2019
    Thank you! You reviewed the one after this re-cap so I'm thankful that you did both. Blessings and hugs!
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Hi Helen. I see you are gearing up to continue with your charming story. I think the recap is very good. This has helped me by going over it. The most confusing part is the names of the characters which are quite similar. Hoping I can keep them all straight in my mind. Has anyone else mentioned this to you? It's too late to change any of the names now, I think. A glossary in author's notes with each post will help greatly. Marilyn


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reply by the author on 10-May-2019
    Yes, Alx mentioned the same thing. I did want that odd sound in names to keep the reader feeling things were foreign. I do think I need to create a more ways to keep the characters separate! Thanks so much for the review, Marilyn! Hugs!
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This is interesting, very interesting indeed. I like all of the different characters you've incorporated into this intriguing work. I guess that I shouldn't be surprised that trees are and will be a central part of this well written offering. Well done and keep it coming!


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reply by the author on 10-May-2019
    Lol. We both like trees so I'm glad you picked up on that aspect of the storyline! Thanks so much, Jeffrey. Blessings to you and yours!
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Hooray!! :) ;) This means a new chapter is coming out soon! ;) ;) Well, I scanned through the recap to make sure I was up to date... and I am....so-o-o-o, bring it on, Professor! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette


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reply by the author on 10-May-2019
    Thank you so much, Yvette! Appreciate your support in this effort. Hugs!
    Have a lovely Mother's Day weekend!
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Cheers, Helen;
>Thank you wonderfully and dearly, Helen, for writing a thorough synopsis of the story that you roughly and abruptly stopped about 9 1/2 weeks or so ago, just like you wrote. I was wondering where that went.
>I like your synopsis it really puts more things together because I really wasn't sure about Ashes consciousness when there was communication between Hen and Ash And the Bohdee.
> Thank you again, Helen and take care and have a good one.
Alx
> PS: if you like diddling the drawing maybe you could draw a short map of where the boat would be live. Kind of like you may have that a pilot would draw. A simple representation That could be displayed in your body of your work, especially where they crashed and were Ash buried.
I know would be a great reference for me anyway to get a visual perspective of the Layout of the whole environment.


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reply by the author on 10-May-2019
    The spacecraft is not far away from the forest and an easy walk to where most of the action takes place. I'm not much of a map maker but I will definitely consider it. Thanks for the great review and suggestion. Blessings!

reply by krys123 on 11-May-2019
    You're always welcome, I see you doing very well as a teaching writer, because that's what you do so well.
    Alx
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Serious AVATAR overtones here but I'll cop that. I am a huge fan of that movie. Nice spin on the theme and Sigourney Weaver's - sorry, Ash - rebirth/transmogrification. DJ


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reply by the author on 10-May-2019
    Thanks, DJ! I liked that movie, too. But the root communication thing was from my reading Wolleben's "Hidden Life of Trees." He quotes the UBC professor Suzanne Simard.
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Thanks for the update. Both the Bodee and the Ghozztee, are quite different from one another, but share a common ancestry, but they want Hen to leave the planet, but then what about Ash, well done Helen, looking forward, blessings, Roy


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reply by the author on 10-May-2019
    Thank you so much for reading this recap. It seems you already remembered. Appreciate you, Roy!
    Blessings!

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    Well done
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Hi Helen, I'm glad that you wrote this and caught me up on your book! The story sounds like a lot of fun. I hate joining something mid-stream. Now I don't really have to worry about it!:)


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reply by the author on 10-May-2019
    Thank you so much, Susan! It's been my pet project to do a kids' book but I'm finding it hard to keep at it. In the previous chapters, I tried to include some science factoid but I'm just going to write to finish now. Lol. Bless you!
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I remembered the characters of Hen and Ash and the Bohdee world, but your summary brought back the important details. I had forgotten that Peeztee is bilingual. Thanks for taking the time to refresh our memory. Smiles- Joan


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reply by the author on 09-May-2019
    Thank you so much for the review, Joan. I will try to finish this off soon. I really appreciate your kind support in reading my prose, too! Hugs!
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Oh, boy! I hope it's soon. I've missed those little people. I hope nothing happens to change their world. They're so happy and kind. I wouldn't mind living there. lol


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reply by the author on 10-May-2019
    Oh, they would be so honored to have you there. Thank you so much for your kind support, Yvonne! Hugs!
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